On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 5:47 PM, Ate Douma <[email protected]> wrote:
> On 02/14/2012 03:31 PM, Franklin, Matthew B. wrote:
>>
>> I have created a draft of the graduation board resolution [1] and would
>> like to get feedback from the community regarding the proposal;
>> specifically, the wording of the description&  scope.  Ate made a great
>> point that we need to ensure it is narrow enough that we can execute against
>> it, but broad enough to include future use cases.  The rest of the template
>> was filled out with the result of PPMC discussions held on rave-private@
>>
> Thanks for drafting up the charter Matt.
>
> The crucial part of the charter we should agree upon is indeed the
> description of the *scope* of the project.
>
> The proposed text currently is:
>
>  [..] "a widget-based, web-and-social mashup and user experience platform"
> [..]
>
> While definitely a good description for the scope, I would still like to
> propose a very minor but possible important change, like this:
>
>  "a widgets, web-and-social mashup and user experience platform"

I believe widget-based would be more inclusive than 'widget'  Widget
*might* imply W3C widget.

>
> The reason for this slight change is that saying "a widget-based, [...]"
> might be interpreted as if Rave at least assumes/requires widgets to be
> used.
>
As a heavy user of Rave, we count on it supporting Widgets.  Removing
Widget from the scope would narrow the scope of the project and be a
limiter of our future use of the platform.

It might be better to be more specific that on the intent of widgets
are optional.  Sorry I don't have better wording...it is a suggestion
if someone was so inclined.

> I *think* (but this really is about semantics and grammar, in a non-native
> language for me), my proposed change makes it more optional to use widgets,
> as just one possible feature of the platform.
>
> IMO 'a web-and-social mashup and user experience platform' (thus without
> using/requiring widgets) also very much fits the bill for Rave.
>

perhaps a change of the clause 'web-and-social mashup and user
experience platform'

to 'web-and-social mashup user experience platform' The 'and' never
did much for me but I'm an engineer not an English major.

> WDYT?
>
> Regards, Ate
>
>> Once we have an agreed upon resolution, we can call a community VOTE for
>> Graduation and proceed with the process.
>>
>> Let's get ready to graduate!
>>
>> -Matt
>>
>> [1] :
>> https://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/attachment/12514364/graduation_resolution.txt
>>
>>
>

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