On Aug 2, 2010, at 7:34 AM, Stephen D. Strowes wrote: > Without looking in too much detail at -09 yet, I think a useful > editorial tweak would be for each proposal to cite the relevant > documents its own Summary section, or at least forward reference the > appropriate subsection in section 21. > > I think the summary descriptions of some proposals are (necessarily) > terse, but this can be offset by immediately pointing the reader at more > information.
Hi Stephen, Thank you for your comment. This turns out to also be necessary, as the IETF's idnits tool, which must run cleanly prior to final publication, is not prepared to accept the many different references subsections that we were using. Thus, I've added the forward references in the summary sections and collapsed all of the references into one larger section. This will appear in version 10 of the draft, which I've just submitted. Regards, Tony _______________________________________________ rrg mailing list [email protected] http://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/rrg
