Hi Michael, thank you for the most expedient response. Both updates are in the new working version.
Regards, Greg On Mon, May 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM, Michael Richardson <[email protected]> wrote: > > Greg Mirsky <[email protected]> wrote: > > The text that follows the first sentence in section 4.13.1 is the > > replacement of the entire section 6.8.6 of RFC 5880. Would stressing > that > > make the relationship more clear, e.g.: > > txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.6 of > [RFC5880]. > > > And the same can be applied to the first sentence in section 14.3.3: > > txt> The following procedure replaces the entire section 6.8.7 of > [RFC5880]. > > That seems like good text. > > -- > ] Never tell me the odds! | ipv6 mesh > networks [ > ] Michael Richardson, Sandelman Software Works | network > architect [ > ] [email protected] http://www.sandelman.ca/ | ruby on > rails [ > >
