Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt

2020-06-11 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
Hi Les,

Sorry for missing that.  There's often a torrent of email right before
a telechat and this got lost in there.

On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 11:19 AM Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
 wrote:
> [Les:] IS-IS registries are guided by RFC 7370 (referenced in Section 7 and 
> in 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml
>   ) - which does provide guidance to the experts.
> There is some additional guidance in Section 7.3 because we want codepoints 
> in the existing "sub-TLV of TLVs 22, 23, 25, 141, 222, and 223" registry to 
> be in sync with the new registry whenever possible.
> For Section 7.5 there really isn’t anything else to say beyond what RFC 7370 
> says.

Apologies, you're correct.  I didn't connect the text in Section 7
with 7.5 for some reason.  I think I was simply struck by the fact
that 7.3 was explicit while 7.5 wasn't.

I'll update my position now.  Thank you for setting me straight.

-MSK

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Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt

2020-06-11 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Murray -

You never replied to my response to your comments - otherwise we could have 
continued the discussion in that thread.

What I replied there on this point was:

[Les:] IS-IS registries are guided by RFC 7370 (referenced in Section 7 and in 
https://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml  
) - which does provide guidance to the experts.
There is some additional guidance in Section 7.3 because we want codepoints in 
the existing "sub-TLV of TLVs 22, 23, 25, 141, 222, and 223" registry to be in 
sync with the new registry whenever possible.
For Section 7.5 there really isn’t anything else to say beyond what RFC 7370 
says.

   Les


> -Original Message-
> From: Murray S. Kucherawy 
> Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 11:05 AM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
> Cc: lsr@ietf.org; Martin Duke ; Rob Wilton
> (rwilton) ; Roman Danyliw ; Deborah
> Brungard ; Benjamin Kaduk 
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> 
> Hi Les,
> 
> I'm afraid I don't see how this revision resolves my DISCUSS point,
> which is that Section 7.5 creates a registry under "Expert Review"
> terms; BCP 26 pushes the point that such a registry definition should
> include guidance to the Designated Expert about how to handle new
> applications, but Section 7.5 doesn't.
> 
> On the other hand, Section 7.3 gets this right; note its last paragraph.
> 
> For that matter, BCP 26 recommends including a "Change Controller"
> column, but neither registry created here does so.  Is that
> intentional?
> 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/bcp26#section-4.5
> 
> -MSK
> 
> On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
>  wrote:
> >
> > Folks -
> >
> > This update to the draft addresses comments from the following IESG
> reviewers:
> >
> > Murray Kucherawy
> > Martin Duke
> > Rob Wilton
> > Roman Danyliw
> > Deborah Brungard
> > Benjamin Kaduk
> >
> > It also includes grammatical corrections related to the use of "which/that".
> >
> > A special thank you to Acee Lindem for his tireless efforts to improve my
> grammar.
> >
> >   Les
> >
> > > -Original Message-
> > > From: Lsr  On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org
> > > Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 10:06 AM
> > > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> > > Cc: lsr@ietf.org
> > > Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> > >
> > >
> > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > > This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.
> > >
> > > Title   : IS-IS TE Attributes per application
> > > Authors : Les Ginsberg
> > >   Peter Psenak
> > >   Stefano Previdi
> > >   Wim Henderickx
> > >   John Drake
> > >   Filename: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> > >   Pages   : 21
> > >   Date: 2020-06-11
> > >
> > > Abstract:
> > >Existing traffic engineering related link attribute advertisements
> > >have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
> > >original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
> > >Segment Routing Policy, Loop Free Alternate) that also make use of
> > >the link attribute advertisements have been defined . In cases where
> > >multiple applications wish to make use of these link attributes, the
> > >current advertisements do not support application specific values for
> > >a given attribute, nor do they support indication of which
> > >applications are using the advertised value for a given link.  This
> > >document introduces new link attribute advertisements that address
> > >both of these shortcomings.
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-te-app/
> > >
> > > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> > >
> > > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> > >
> > >
> > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> > >
> > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> > >
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Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt

2020-06-11 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
Hi Les,

I'm afraid I don't see how this revision resolves my DISCUSS point,
which is that Section 7.5 creates a registry under "Expert Review"
terms; BCP 26 pushes the point that such a registry definition should
include guidance to the Designated Expert about how to handle new
applications, but Section 7.5 doesn't.

On the other hand, Section 7.3 gets this right; note its last paragraph.

For that matter, BCP 26 recommends including a "Change Controller"
column, but neither registry created here does so.  Is that
intentional?

https://tools.ietf.org/html/bcp26#section-4.5

-MSK

On Thu, Jun 11, 2020 at 10:16 AM Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
 wrote:
>
> Folks -
>
> This update to the draft addresses comments from the following IESG reviewers:
>
> Murray Kucherawy
> Martin Duke
> Rob Wilton
> Roman Danyliw
> Deborah Brungard
> Benjamin Kaduk
>
> It also includes grammatical corrections related to the use of "which/that".
>
> A special thank you to Acee Lindem for his tireless efforts to improve my 
> grammar.
>
>   Les
>
> > -Original Message-
> > From: Lsr  On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org
> > Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 10:06 AM
> > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> > Cc: lsr@ietf.org
> > Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.
> >
> > Title   : IS-IS TE Attributes per application
> > Authors : Les Ginsberg
> >   Peter Psenak
> >   Stefano Previdi
> >   Wim Henderickx
> >   John Drake
> >   Filename: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> >   Pages   : 21
> >   Date: 2020-06-11
> >
> > Abstract:
> >Existing traffic engineering related link attribute advertisements
> >have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
> >original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
> >Segment Routing Policy, Loop Free Alternate) that also make use of
> >the link attribute advertisements have been defined . In cases where
> >multiple applications wish to make use of these link attributes, the
> >current advertisements do not support application specific values for
> >a given attribute, nor do they support indication of which
> >applications are using the advertised value for a given link.  This
> >document introduces new link attribute advertisements that address
> >both of these shortcomings.
> >
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-te-app/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >
> >
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Re: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt

2020-06-11 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Folks -

This update to the draft addresses comments from the following IESG reviewers:

Murray Kucherawy
Martin Duke
Rob Wilton
Roman Danyliw
Deborah Brungard
Benjamin Kaduk

It also includes grammatical corrections related to the use of "which/that".

A special thank you to Acee Lindem for his tireless efforts to improve my 
grammar.

  Les

> -Original Message-
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org
> Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 10:06 AM
> To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> Cc: lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: [Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.
> 
> Title   : IS-IS TE Attributes per application
> Authors : Les Ginsberg
>   Peter Psenak
>   Stefano Previdi
>   Wim Henderickx
>   John Drake
>   Filename: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
>   Pages   : 21
>   Date: 2020-06-11
> 
> Abstract:
>Existing traffic engineering related link attribute advertisements
>have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
>original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
>Segment Routing Policy, Loop Free Alternate) that also make use of
>the link attribute advertisements have been defined . In cases where
>multiple applications wish to make use of these link attributes, the
>current advertisements do not support application specific values for
>a given attribute, nor do they support indication of which
>applications are using the advertised value for a given link.  This
>document introduces new link attribute advertisements that address
>both of these shortcomings.
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-te-app/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> 
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[Lsr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt

2020-06-11 Thread internet-drafts


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Link State Routing WG of the IETF.

Title   : IS-IS TE Attributes per application
Authors : Les Ginsberg
  Peter Psenak
  Stefano Previdi
  Wim Henderickx
  John Drake
Filename: draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15.txt
Pages   : 21
Date: 2020-06-11

Abstract:
   Existing traffic engineering related link attribute advertisements
   have been defined and are used in RSVP-TE deployments.  Since the
   original RSVP-TE use case was defined, additional applications (e.g.,
   Segment Routing Policy, Loop Free Alternate) that also make use of
   the link attribute advertisements have been defined . In cases where
   multiple applications wish to make use of these link attributes, the
   current advertisements do not support application specific values for
   a given attribute, nor do they support indication of which
   applications are using the advertised value for a given link.  This
   document introduces new link attribute advertisements that address
   both of these shortcomings.



The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-te-app/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-isis-te-app-15


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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