Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Rick Womer]

I would like to see it cropped to an 8 x 10, losing the truck.

Of course, I’m feeling especially contrary lately.

Rick



> On Jul 4, 2017, at 9:21 PM, pdml-m...@charter.net wrote:
> 
> Hi Ann -
> I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
> alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
> removed:
> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9
> Mark
> 
>   -From: "Mark C" 
> 
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> Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana
> 
> On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
>> Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the 
>> thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go
> messin 
>> with that sky :-)
>> in my eye, that is the center of interest
>> 
>> ann
>> 
>> On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>> Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark 
>>> clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the
> center 
>>> of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the 
>>> approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so
> in 
>>> my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not
> 
>>> just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud
> is 
>>> to go to a weird crop, like 16:9
>>> 
>>> Mark
>>> 
>>> On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
>>>> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the
> 
>>>> fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just
> say 
>>>> that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the
> truck) 
>>>> but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence
> 
>>>> look like they could be from an earlier time.
>>>> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like
> 
>>>> to see that
>>>> 
>>>> ann
>>>> 
>>>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>>>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers
> of 
>>>>> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I
> might 
>>>>> try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one
> 
>>>>> with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I
> don't 
>>>>> think there is enough going on in the image.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Mark
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
>>>>>> Great sky.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have
> some 
>>>>>> quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence
> and 
>>>>>> passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not
> 
>>>>>> sure.)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd
> say 
>>>>>> crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not
> without 
>>>>>> cloning.)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>>>>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few
> hours 
>>>>>>> ago
>>>>>>> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday
> -
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
> /> >>>>>>
>>>>>>> or on flickr:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
> /> >>>>>>
>>>>>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[ann sanfedele]

In the dawns early light I like it a lot :-)
Good morning!
ann

On 7/4/2017 9:21 PM, pdml-m...@charter.net wrote:

Hi Ann -
I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
removed:
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9
Mark

-From: "Mark C"

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Sent: 04-Jul-2017 22:52:12 +0000
Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

  On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
  > Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the
  > thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go
messin
  > with that sky :-)
  > in my eye, that is the center of interest
  >
  > ann
  >
  > On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
  >> Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark
  >> clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the
center
  >> of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the
  >> approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so
in
  >> my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not

  >> just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud
is
  >> to go to a weird crop, like 16:9
  >>
  >> Mark
  >>
  >> On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
  >>> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the

  >>> fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just
say
  >>> that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the
truck)
  >>> but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence

  >>> look like they could be from an earlier time.
  >>> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like

  >>> to see that
  >>>
  >>> ann
  >>>
  >>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
  >>>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers
of
  >>>> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I
might
  >>>> try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one

  >>>> with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I
don't
  >>>> think there is enough going on in the image.
  >>>>
  >>>> Mark
  >>>>
  >>>>
  >>>>
  >>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
  >>>>> Great sky.
  >>>>>
  >>>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have
some
  >>>>> quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence
and
  >>>>> passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not

  >>>>> sure.)
  >>>>>
  >>>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd
say
  >>>>> crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not
without
  >>>>> cloning.)
  >>>>>
  >>>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
  >>>>>
  >>>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
  >>>>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few
hours
  >>>>>> ago
  >>>>>> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday
-
  >>>>>>
  >>>>>>
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
  /> >>>>>>
  >>>>>> or on flickr:
  >>>>>>
  >>>>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
  /> >>>>>>
  >>>>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
  >>>>>
  >>>>
  >>>>
  >>>
  >>>
  >>
  >>
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Mark C]

Thanks Marnie - I had sent a reply to Ann but the vagaries of my email 
update kept the re ply from going to the list...


As for the photo - it's done as far as I'm concerned. I got a bunch of 
much worse photos waiting to be posted!


Mark

On 7/4/2017 9:32 PM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Well, my name isn't ann, but in my opinion, not an improvement.

HTH, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 7/4/2017 6:21 PM, pdml-m...@charter.net wrote:

Hi Ann -
I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
removed:
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9 


Mark





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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Marnie (aka Doe)]

Well, my name isn't ann, but in my opinion, not an improvement.

HTH, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 7/4/2017 6:21 PM, pdml-m...@charter.net wrote:

Hi Ann -
I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
removed:
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9
Mark


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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[pdml-mark]

Hi Ann -
I goofed up my reply to this to the list - so here it is again -
alternate crop of the photo with the dark cloud in the upper left
removed:
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana-alternate-crop?blog=9
Mark

-From: "Mark C" 

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Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

 On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
 > Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the 
 > thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go
messin 
 > with that sky :-)
 > in my eye, that is the center of interest
 >
 > ann
 >
 > On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
 >> Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark 
 >> clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the
center 
 >> of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the 
 >> approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so
in 
 >> my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not

 >> just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud
is 
 >> to go to a weird crop, like 16:9
 >>
 >> Mark
 >>
 >> On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
 >>> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the

 >>> fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just
say 
 >>> that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the
truck) 
 >>> but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence

 >>> look like they could be from an earlier time.
 >>> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards? would like

 >>> to see that
 >>>
 >>> ann
 >>>
 >>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
 >>>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers
of 
 >>>> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I
might 
 >>>> try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one

 >>>> with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I
don't 
 >>>> think there is enough going on in the image.
 >>>>
 >>>> Mark
 >>>>
 >>>>
 >>>>
 >>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
 >>>>> Great sky.
 >>>>>
 >>>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have
some 
 >>>>> quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence
and 
 >>>>> passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not

 >>>>> sure.)
 >>>>>
 >>>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd
say 
 >>>>> crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not
without 
 >>>>> cloning.)
 >>>>>
 >>>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
 >>>>>
 >>>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
 >>>>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few
hours 
 >>>>>> ago
 >>>>>> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday
-
 >>>>>>
 >>>>>>
http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
 /> >>>>>>
 >>>>>> or on flickr:
 >>>>>>
 >>>>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
 /> >>>>>>
 >>>>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
 >>>>>
 >>>>
 >>>>
 >>>
 >>>
 >>
 >>
 >
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Marnie (aka Doe)]

Ditto, what she said. Double.

For me, the fence, because it is parallel to the viewer and is not a 
leading line, doesn't add much. Truck? Maybe. I think it would have been 
a great photo without fence and without truck. Just sky and house and 
barn and lots and lots of field. But preference given to the sky.


My $.02.

Marnie aka Doe

On 7/4/2017 3:51 PM, Mark C wrote:

On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:

Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the
thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go messin
with that sky :-)
in my eye, that is the center of interest

ann

On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:

Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark
clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the center
of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the
approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so in
my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not
just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud is
to go to a weird crop, like 16:9

Mark

On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:

The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the
fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say
that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the truck)
but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence
look like they could be from an earlier time.
Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like
to see that

ann

On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:

Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might
try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one
with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I don't
think there is enough going on in the image.

Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not
sure.)

I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say
crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without
cloning.)

Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)


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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Mark C]

On 7/4/2017 8:42 AM, ann sanfedele wrote:
Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the 
thing for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go messin 
with that sky :-)

in my eye, that is the center of interest

ann

On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark 
clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the center 
of interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the 
approaching storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so in 
my mind the sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not 
just looking at the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud is 
to go to a weird crop, like 16:9


Mark

On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the 
fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say 
that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the truck) 
but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence 
look like they could be from an earlier time.
Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like 
to see that


ann

On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might 
try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one 
with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I don't 
think there is enough going on in the image.


Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not 
sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say 
crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without 
cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours 
ago

and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[ann sanfedele]

Mark - I think you misunderstood... when I said the sky is is the thing 
for me, I meant the sky _makes_ the photo... don't you go messin with 
that sky :-)

in my eye, that is the center of interest

ann

On 7/3/2017 11:55 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks Ann. Coming back to this image tonight I'm seeing the dark 
clouds in the upper left to be a problem - competing for the center of 
interest but also not so much conveying the sense of the approaching 
storm. (I was blowing like mad when I took the shot so in my mind the 
sense of the storm coming up is very real, but I'm not just looking at 
the photo.) But the only way to mitigate the cloud is to go to a weird 
crop, like 16:9


Mark

On 7/3/2017 7:10 PM, ann sanfedele wrote:
The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the 
fence is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say 
that it isn't that there is an object on the far right (the truck) 
but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence 
look like they could be from an earlier time.
Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like to 
see that


ann

On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might 
try a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one 
with just the truck and no fence. Without one or the other I don't 
think there is enough going on in the image.


Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say 
crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without 
cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.














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RE: PESO - Down In Indiana

[John Coyle]

I went back to this one in view of the concerns some have mentioned, and I must 
say the truck
doesn't bother me: in fact, I think it adds to the composition.  My eye went 
immediately to the red
barn, as one might expect, and then travelled to the right along the arc to the 
truck, before going
to the sky.  My only quibble would be I would have gone as close to the fence 
as possible to look
over the top of the rusty wire and posts!


John in Brisbane



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From: PDML [mailto:pdml-boun...@pdml.net] On Behalf Of Jack Davis
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Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

The barn placement troubles me.
It must be the strong color and near
center location. 
The insignificant wire fence has no role and the far elements fail to supply 
the necessary weight to
count them as points of interest.
Admit having looked at this only on
my cell.

J

Sent from my iPhone

> On Jul 3, 2017, at 4:10 PM, ann sanfedele <ann...@nyc.rr.com> wrote:
> 
> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the fence is 
> fine too -- if I
started getting nit-picky I would just say that it isn't that there is an 
object on the far right
(the truck) but that the truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence 
look like they could
be from an earlier time.
> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like to 
> see that
> 
> ann
> 
>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
>> interest. I have other shots
without the fence and truck. I might try a shot with just the fence, no truck, 
since I don't have
one with just the truck and no fence.  Without one or the other I don't think 
there is enough going
on in the image.
>> 
>> Mark
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
>>> Great sky.
>>> 
>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
>>> quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
>>> passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not 
>>> sure.)
>>> 
>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say 
>>> crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without 
>>> cloning.)
>>> 
>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
>>> 
>>>> On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
>>>> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours 
>>>> ago and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday 
>>>> -
>>>> 
>>>> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
>>>> 
>>>> or on flickr:
>>>> 
>>>> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
>>>> 
>>>> K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Jack Davis]

The barn placement troubles me.
It must be the strong color and near
center location. 
The insignificant wire fence has no role and the far elements fail to
supply the necessary weight to count them as points of interest.
Admit having looked at this only on
my cell.

J

Sent from my iPhone

> On Jul 3, 2017, at 4:10 PM, ann sanfedele  wrote:
> 
> The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the fence is 
> fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say that it isn't 
> that there is an object on the far right (the truck) but that the truck is 
> too modern looking - the barn and the fence look like they could be from an 
> earlier time.
> Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like to see that
> 
> ann
> 
>> On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
>> Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
>> interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try a shot 
>> with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just the truck 
>> and no fence.  Without one or the other I don't think there is enough going 
>> on in the image.
>> 
>> Mark
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:
>>> Great sky.
>>> 
>>> I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some quibbles. 
>>> Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and passing truck isn't 
>>> pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)
>>> 
>>> I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop it, 
>>> but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.)
>>> 
>>> Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)
>>> 
 On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:
 I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
 and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
 
 http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
 
 or on flickr:
 
 https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
 
 K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[ann sanfedele]

The sky is the thing for me. - but the barn is just right and the fence 
is fine too -- if I started getting nit-picky I would just say that it 
isn't that there is an object on the far right (the truck) but that the 
truck is too modern looking - the barn and the fence look like they 
could be from an earlier time.
Is your truckless frame the same in all other regards?  would like to 
see that


ann

On 7/1/2017 1:38 PM, Mark C wrote:
Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try 
a shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just 
the truck and no fence.  Without one or the other I don't think there 
is enough going on in the image.


Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say 
crop it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without 
cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Alan C]

I disagree. The barn is the focal point, the others add to the scene. For 
instance, Bruegel's paintings & Giles' cartoons mostly have things going on 
in the background (often naughty) which adds interest & compels the viewer 
to look a bit deeper.


Alan C

-Original Message- 
From: Mark C

Sent: Saturday, July 01, 2017 7:38 PM
To: pdml@pdml.net
Subject: Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try a
shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just the
truck and no fence.  Without one or the other I don't think there is
enough going on in the image.

Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some quibbles. 
Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and passing truck 
isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop it, 
but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Mark C]

Thanks, Marne. I think you are right about the competing centers of 
interest. I have other shots without the fence and truck. I might try a 
shot with just the fence, no truck, since I don't have one with just the 
truck and no fence.  Without one or the other I don't think there is 
enough going on in the image.


Mark



On 7/1/2017 1:07 AM, Marnie (aka Doe) wrote:

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop 
it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Paul Stenquist]

This looks great on my computer, and it’s substantially sized. But it was small 
and didn’t play well on my phone. Don’t know why. 

Great shot. Love the fence going one way, and the truck moving off in another 
direction. And of course the barn is a classic, and it’s perfectly placed in 
frame. Well done!
> On Jul 1, 2017, at 8:50 AM, Alan C <c...@lantic.net> wrote:
> 
> Striking. A bit of everything there - the threatening sky, the mowed field, 
> the fence, the farm sheds, a Semi plus a few wild flowers for interest.
> 
> Alan C
> 
> -Original Message- From: Mark C
> Sent: Saturday, July 01, 2017 5:49 AM
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> Subject: PESO - Down In Indiana
> 
> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
> and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
> 
> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
> 
> or on flickr:
> 
> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
> 
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Alan C]

Striking. A bit of everything there - the threatening sky, the mowed field, 
the fence, the farm sheds, a Semi plus a few wild flowers for interest.


Alan C

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Subject: PESO - Down In Indiana

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Daniel J. Matyola]

With that "big sky," are you sure it wasn't Montana?  
The sky is, to me, the main feature of the image, but I think it is
inclusion of the foreground fence that makes the shot special.


Dan Matyola
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On Fri, Jun 30, 2017 at 11:49 PM, Mark C  wrote:

> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago and
> am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
>
> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
>
> or on flickr:
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> https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/
>
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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Marnie (aka Doe)]

Great sky.

I usually love your shots, it's strange to me to say I have some 
quibbles. Something about the placement of the barn, re fence and 
passing truck isn't pleasing to me. (Too many focal points? Not sure.)


I would have walked closer to the fence to leave it out. (I'd say crop 
it, but don't think it can be done now. At least not without cloning.)


Take with a grain of salt, Marnie aka Doe :-)

On 6/30/2017 8:49 PM, Mark C wrote:

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -

http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

https://www.flickr.com/photos/markcassino/35641165115/

K1 and FA 20-35 f4 @ f16.


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Re: PESO - Down In Indiana

[Paul Stenquist]

Nice, but very low res as shown.

Paul via phone

> On Jun 30, 2017, at 11:49 PM, Mark C  wrote:
> 
> I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago and am 
> starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -
> 
> http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana
> 
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PESO - Down In Indiana

[Mark C]

I spent the last week down in rural Indiana, got home a few hours ago 
and am starting to review images. Here's a shot from yesterday -


http://www.markcassino.com/b2evolution/index.php/down-in-indiana

or on flickr:

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