[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-6man-lineid-05

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[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-watson-fecframe-raptor-10

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-kucherawy-authres-spf-erratum-01

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART last call review of draft-ietf-mile-rfc6046-bis-05

I agree, the guidance in RFC6125 Section 2.4 is pretty clear and should just be referenced if we go this route. I do have a question out to a practitioner to see if we need to allow anything other than DNS-IDs. She did say support is good in CAs, maybe it is OK to require DNS-IDs. She will

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ash-gcac-algorithm-spec-03.txt

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[Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-6man-exthdr-05

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-irtf-hiprg-dht-04

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lisp-multicast-08

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[Gen-art] GEN-ART review of draft-ietf-krb-wg-clear-text-cred-02

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-decade-survey-04

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[Gen-art] GEN-ART review for draft-li-pwe3-ms-pw-pon-03

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

Hi Simon, Thank you for the update. How about the following which slightly changes your proposed text: o vCards often carry information that can be sensitive (e.g. birthday, address, and phone information). Although vCards have no inherent authentication or privacy provisions,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

Simon, I am fine with the changes. The last is not a Gen-ART, but was put there for adding considerations to the security section. I just meant that it should state that there may be privacy concerns with some of the information. I listed the regulations to give examples, but not to have

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev

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[Gen-art] GEN-ART review of draft-ietf-genarea-charter-tool-07

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[Gen-art] GEN-ART Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v6-in-mobile-networks-03

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[Gen-art] GEN-Art review of draft-ietf-isis-layer2-09

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-turner-additional-new-asn-06

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-cdmi-mediatypes-06

I have reviewed the updated version of this document. All recommended changes have been made and I do not see any issues with the additional text added to the document. Best regards, Kathleen -Original Message- From: gen-art-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-turner-md2-to-historic-05

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-lundberg-app-tei-xml-06

Hello, It appears that the prior recommendations from the Gen-art REVIEW have been implemented in the current version of the draft, but I did just notice the following: Section 4 has a few acronyms that have not been spelled out earlier in the document - URI, IRI, and XML. Thanks, Kathleen

Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-ART] Gen-ART review of draft-lundberg-app-tei-xml-03

Hello, Sigge. You can integrate the comments in your next revision. I don't think my comments will hold up publication. I am happy to review again once you have updated the draft. Thank you, Kathleen -Original Message- From: Sigfrid Lundberg [mailto:s...@kb.dk] Sent: Thursday,

[Gen-art] Review: draft-josefsson-pbkdf2-test-vectors

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