[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

2014-04-07 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

2014-04-07 Thread Jon Mitchell (GNS)
Yes, this duplicate paragraph in IANA considerations is a typo introduced in -04, can be removed via editing process to allow IESG review w/o update if AD OK's that approach or draft updated to remove if that is preferred. Alia? I'm also willing to change to Acknowledgments (no e after g)

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

2014-04-07 Thread Alia Atlas
On Mon, Apr 7, 2014 at 9:07 AM, Jon Mitchell (GNS) jon.mitch...@microsoft.com wrote: Yes, this duplicate paragraph in IANA considerations is a typo introduced in -04, can be removed via editing process to allow IESG review w/o update if AD OK's that approach or draft updated to remove if

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

2014-04-07 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: Yes, this duplicate paragraph in IANA considerations is a typo introduced = fine (the problem with a typo is authors' intent is not clear / hard to infer). I'm also willing to change to Acknowledgments (no e after g) which I think is the suggestion being

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early Review of draft-hoffman-xml2rfc-04

2014-04-07 Thread Ben Campbell
Hi, thanks for the quick response. Comments inline; sections that do not seem to need further comment are deleted, and marked with [...] Thanks! Ben. On Apr 5, 2014, at 8:10 PM, Paul Hoffman paul.hoff...@vpnc.org wrote: [...] -- Section 1, paragraph 2: I find it confusing that we have

[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-mac-opt-11

2014-04-07 Thread Robert Sparks
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-mac-opt-11

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early Review of draft-hoffman-xml2rfc-04

2014-04-07 Thread Paul Hoffman
Comment-on-comments below. I now have one new action item. --Paul Hoffman On Apr 7, 2014, at 11:37 AM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: Hi, thanks for the quick response. Comments inline; sections that do not seem to need further comment are deleted, and marked with [...] Thanks!

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early Review of draft-hoffman-xml2rfc-04

2014-04-07 Thread Ben Campbell
On Apr 7, 2014, at 2:42 PM, Paul Hoffman paul.hoff...@vpnc.org wrote: Comment-on-comments below. I now have one new action item. --Paul Hoffman On Apr 7, 2014, at 11:37 AM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: [...] --2.2: Can I have more than one of any given address

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early Review of draft-hoffman-xml2rfc-04

2014-04-07 Thread Paul Hoffman
On Apr 7, 2014, at 1:39 PM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: On Apr 7, 2014, at 2:42 PM, Paul Hoffman paul.hoff...@vpnc.org wrote: Comment-on-comments below. I now have one new action item. --Paul Hoffman --2.2: Can I have more than one of any given address sub-element? If so,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Early Review of draft-hoffman-xml2rfc-04

2014-04-07 Thread Ben Campbell
Okay on all topics save the one below. Thanks! Ben. On Apr 7, 2014, at 4:34 PM, Paul Hoffman paul.hoff...@vpnc.org wrote: [...] -- 5, security considerations I wonder if the possibility of executable content existing in an RFC or draft is worth mention here? For an extreme example,