Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration-16

2024-03-11 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Pascal, Thank you for your response. This makes sense to me, with one observation. On Mon, Mar 11, 2024 at 3:11 PM Pascal Thubert wrote: > > 2. The deployment and backwards compatibility sections are quite good, but is > there a recommended strategy for updating existing deployments in

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration-16

2024-03-04 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-suit-manifest-25

2024-02-18 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-24

2024-01-31 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-gnap-core-protocol-16

2023-11-28 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] For Dan Romascanu, Genart Last Call review by 2023-11-21 assigned: draft-ietf-gnap-core-protocol

2023-11-18 Thread Dan Romascanu
On 11/17/23 12:02 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote: > > Hi Dan, > > I will ask the AD and chairs if they'd be willing to extend the deadline > given the length of the doc and the intervening IETF meeting. > > Thanks! > Jean > > > On 11/16/23 4:46 PM, Dan Ro

Re: [Gen-art] For Dan Romascanu, Genart Last Call review by 2023-11-21 assigned: draft-ietf-gnap-core-protocol

2023-11-16 Thread Dan Romascanu
tf-gnap-core-protocol (no specific version) > Deadline: 2023-11-21 > Pages: 225 > Requested by: (System) > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-gnap-core-protocol/reviewrequest/18421/login/ > > Jean Mahoney has assigned Dan Romas

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-12

2023-10-03 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-sdwan-usage-14

2023-07-26 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

2023-04-10 Thread Dan Romascanu
to this registration document. > > > > Thanks again for all the feedback and comments. > > Derek > > > > -- > > Derek Engi > > dee...@cisco.com > > > > > > *From: *Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > *Date: *Saturday, March 18, 2023 at 4:36 AM > *To

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-asap-siptrunkingcapability-link-03

2023-03-18 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-message-signatures-16

2023-02-14 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-09

2022-11-28 Thread Dan Romascanu
-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10 > > Best, > Jean > > > -Original Message- > > From: Dan Romascanu via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > > Sent: Monday 14 November 2022 19:36 > > To: gen-art@ietf.org > > Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yan

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-09

2022-11-14 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-unsolicited-10

2022-11-02 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-flex-algo-23

2022-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-12

2022-05-12 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Hendrik, Thank you for addressing my (minor) concerns. The changes are fine with me. Regards, Dan On Wed, May 11, 2022 at 6:15 PM Brockhaus, Hendrik < hendrik.brockh...@siemens.com> wrote: > Dan > > Many thanks for your review. Please find my proposal below. > > >

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-12

2022-05-06 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-comparison-02

2022-03-15 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-17

2022-01-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
gards, > Paul > > > On Tue, Jan 25, 2022 at 7:26 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review result: Ready with Issues >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area &g

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-facing-interface-dm-17

2022-01-25 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-http2bis-06

2021-11-22 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-multilevel-single-nickname-15

2021-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-tcp-requirements-12

2021-09-07 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Duane, Thank you for your answer and for addressing my concerns. I am fine with the proposed resolutions. Regards, Dan On Tue, Sep 7, 2021 at 7:46 PM Wessels, Duane wrote: > Dan, thanks for the review. Responses are inline. > > > > > On Sep 1, 2021, at 3:12 AM,

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-tcp-requirements-12

2021-09-01 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04

2021-06-21 Thread Dan Romascanu
Looks good. Thanks for addressing this as well. Regards, Dan On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 3:06 PM Jen Linkova wrote: > On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 8:16 PM Dan Romascanu wrote: > > Yes, a paragraph in the Introduction explaining the structure of the > document and especially the pl

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04

2021-06-21 Thread Dan Romascanu
Thank you for addressing my comments. See in-line. Regards, Dan On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 10:02 AM Jen Linkova wrote: > Hi Dan, > > Thanks a lot for reviewing the document! > > On Fri, Jun 18, 2021 at 4:00 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > Nits/edito

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04

2021-06-17 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart Last Call review: draft-ietf-6man-grand

2021-06-17 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi, Due to a system glitch I cannot enter my reviews via the tool. Until this is fixed, here are my early comments to draft-ietf-6man-grand, which was assigned to me. Version Reviewed - 04 State: Ready with Editorial Comments This is a very well written document. I appreciate the section

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls-09

2021-04-20 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Sara, Thank you for the response and for addressing the nit-comments in my review. All seems fine to me now from my end. Regards, Dan On Tue, Apr 20, 2021 at 11:51 AM Sara Dickinson wrote: > > > On 17 Apr 2021, at 10:43, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > Revie

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls-09

2021-04-17 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41

2021-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
3AM -0800, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > > Review result: Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > > by the IESG

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls13-41

2021-02-16 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02

2021-02-04 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-data-11

2020-12-05 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-source-specific-06

2020-10-24 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-09

2020-09-09 Thread Dan Romascanu
> I have addressed your comments in the revision: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-11 > > Please see my answers below. > > On Thu, Sep 3, 2020 at 6:22 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-09

2020-09-03 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-option-tlv-06

2020-07-18 Thread Dan Romascanu
Dan's review reminded me of one other point (inline)... >> >> On Thu, Jul 02, 2020 at 12:22:04PM -0700, Greg Mirsky wrote: >> > Hi Dan, >> > thank you for your review, detailed questions, and helpful suggestions. >> > Please find my answers and notes below tagged G

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-option-tlv-06

2020-07-02 Thread Dan Romascanu
elpful suggestions. > Please find my answers and notes below tagged GIM>>. > > Regards, > Greg > > On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 8:02 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review result: Read

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-option-tlv-06

2020-06-29 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-multilevel-single-nickname-09

2020-05-22 Thread Dan Romascanu
室-巴黎研究所数通实验室 > DataCom’s Lab, 2012 Laboratories-Paris Research Center, Huawei > > > -Original Message- > > From: Dan Romascanu via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > > Sent: Wednesday, May 20, 2020 10:37 AM > > To: gen-art@ietf.org > > Cc: draf

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-multilevel-single-nickname-09

2020-05-20 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06

2020-04-21 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] [core] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-05

2020-04-12 Thread Dan Romascanu
Looks good to me. Thanks for addressing these points. Regards, Dan On Sun, Apr 12, 2020 at 12:31 PM Klaus Hartke wrote: > Dan Romascanu wrote: > >> > 1. It would be useful to include some considerations whether the > authors > >> > consider useful / possibl

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-07

2020-04-03 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-05

2020-04-01 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Klaus, Thanks for your quick reply and for addressing the issues raised in my review. See below my short comments on a couple of issues. Regards, Dan On Wed, Apr 1, 2020 at 1:27 PM Klaus Hartke wrote: > Dan Romascanu wrote: > > This is a very clear and well-written documen

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-05

2020-04-01 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-23

2020-03-09 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-06

2020-03-09 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Jari, Thank you for the answer and for addressing the issues raised in my review. Looks fine to me by now, I am waiting for version -07 to check the precise edits. Regards, Dan On Mon, Mar 9, 2020 at 2:28 PM Jari Arkko wrote: > Thanks for your review, Dan. > > Some responses below. We

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-22

2020-02-28 Thread Dan Romascanu
gnar Sundblad wrote: > > Hi Dan, > > > On 27 Feb 2020, at 21:31, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > > > Thanks Ragnar, for the quick answer. > > > > See in-line. > > > > Regards, > > > > Dan > > > > > > On Thu, Feb 27, 2020 at 6:56

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-22

2020-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
Ok, thanks. Regards, Dan On Fri, Feb 28, 2020 at 2:24 AM Ragnar Sundblad wrote: > > Hi Dan, > > > On 27 Feb 2020, at 21:31, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > > > Thanks Ragnar, for the quick answer. > > > > See in-line. > > > > Regards, > > &

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-22

2020-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
Thanks Ragnar, for the quick answer. See in-line. Regards, Dan On Thu, Feb 27, 2020 at 6:56 PM Ragnar Sundblad wrote: > > Hi Dan, > > Thank you for reviewing! > > On 26 Feb 2020, at 11:06, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Dan R

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-22

2020-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-rfc5448bis-06

2020-01-25 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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Re: [Gen-art] [MBONED] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mboned-driad-amt-discovery-09

2019-12-03 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Jake, Thanks for addressing these issues. No further comments. Regards, Dan On Tue, Dec 3, 2019 at 6:57 PM Holland, Jake wrote: > Hi Dan, > > On 2019-11-28, 07:22, "Dan Romascanu via Datatracker" > wrote: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. The readi

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

2019-10-13 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-dtls-05

2019-06-25 Thread Dan Romascanu
Thanks for the quick reply. See in-line. regards, Dan On Tue, Jun 25, 2019 at 9:29 PM David Schinazi wrote: > Hello Dan, and thanks for your review. Comments inline. > > 1. In section 2.1: >> >> > The default port >>for Babel over DTLS is registered with IANA as the "babel-dtls" port >>

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-dtls-05

2019-06-25 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-eventpub-extensions-12

2019-04-28 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34

2019-04-11 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-09

2019-04-11 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-07

2019-03-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Stefan, Thank you for your answer and for addressing my concerns. I am comfortable with your proposals. If your AD agrees, I would include these in a revised version before submission to the approval of the IESG. Regards, Dan On Tue, Mar 19, 2019 at 5:11 PM stefan vallin wrote: > Hi Dan!

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-07

2019-03-18 Thread Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-faltstrom-unicode11-08

2019-03-18 Thread Dan Romascanu
that > and generate a list of specific chaanges to the table here: > > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/idna-tables-6.3.0/#idna-tables-properties > > > > ...and IANA will then apply those changes. > > > > Barry > > > > On Mon, Mar 18,

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-mail-14

2019-01-31 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement-08

2018-12-21 Thread Dan Romascanu
cern. > > Brgds, > > -Original Message- > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > Sent: Tuesday, December 11, 2018 15:29 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; > rt...@ietf.org; droma...@gmail.com >

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement-08

2018-12-11 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-too-many-reqs-04

2018-10-08 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-06

2018-09-14 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-04-30 Thread Dan Romascanu
ew. > Apologies for the delay. Procrastination and holiday came in the way. > > See below. > > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > > Review result: Almost Ready > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) r

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rmcat-sbd-10

2018-03-02 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] New draft of SWIMA -03

2018-02-28 Thread Dan Romascanu
loaded. This draft includes the edits we > discussed. Please let me know if you have any additional comments. Thanks > again for the feedback - it really helped the specification. > > Thanks, > Charles > > > -Original Message- > > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
comments. Regards, Dan On Wed, Feb 28, 2018 at 12:52 AM, Mike Jones <michael.jo...@microsoft.com> wrote: > Replies inline… > > > > *From:* Ace <ace-boun...@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of * Dan Romascanu > *Sent:* Tuesday, February 27, 2018 2:23 PM > *To:* Jim Schaad <

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
s. > > > > There is not anything that is making a distinction on what the criteria to > be used by the DE in the document which is separate, but I don’t think that > is needed. This is why they are DEs. > > > > I still don’t see what you think is missing. > > >

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-27 Thread Dan Romascanu
26, 2018 at 11:19:04PM +0200, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > Hi Jim, > > > > Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. > > > > On item #2: > > > > > > > > On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 10:12 PM, Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com> >

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 11:47 PM, Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com> wrote: > > > > > *From:* Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > *Sent:* Monday, February 26, 2018 1:19 PM > *To:* Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com> > *Cc:* gen-art <gen-art@ietf.o

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Jim, Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. On item #2: On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 10:12 PM, Jim Schaad <i...@augustcellars.com> wrote: > > > > -Original Message----- > > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > > > > ..

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

2018-02-26 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-sacm-nea-swima-patnc-02

2018-02-22 Thread Dan Romascanu
ent, but I also want to make very sure that people don't see SWIMA as > only being applicable in that context.) > > > > Thanks, > > Charles > > > > *From:* Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > *Sent:* Wednesday, February 21, 2018 4:11 PM > *To:* Sc

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-sacm-nea-swima-patnc-02

2018-02-21 Thread Dan Romascanu
y "ensures" a behavior is > incorrect and will fix that.) As such, saying that implementations MUST set > a flag that only SHOULD be obeyed seems to be of questionable use, > especially given that the specification clearly describes what to do if > messages are not exclusive

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lwig-crypto-sensors-05

2018-02-13 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-30 Thread Dan Romascanu
On Tue, Jan 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote: > > > On Jan 29, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Pete Resnick > wrote: > > > > > >> 8. Section 4: > >> > >> 'It is anticipated that > >> those roles will evolve. The IASA is responsible for keeping the > >>

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-29 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Pete, Thanks for your answers and for addressing my concerns. Here are a few answers to your returned questions: On Mon, Jan 29, 2018 at 8:12 PM, Pete Resnick wrote: > > > - 'where the IETF guest room >> allocations are negotiated' - do we mean to say 'where

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mtgvenue-iaoc-venue-selection-process-11

2018-01-24 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-06

2017-12-05 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-22

2017-12-05 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-19

2017-10-09 Thread Dan Romascanu
ceptible to a DDoS attack? Is this with > respect to logging the occurrence of malformed TLVs or Sub-TLVs? If so, > that can be added. > > Thanks, > Acee > > From: Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> > Date: Saturday, October 7, 2017 at 1:57 AM > To: Acee Lindem

Re: [Gen-art] [OSPF] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-19

2017-10-06 Thread Dan Romascanu
0/5/17, 7:05 AM, "OSPF on behalf of Dan Romascanu" > <ospf-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of droma...@gmail.com> wrote: > > >Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > >Review result: Ready with Issues > > > >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General A

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-19

2017-10-05 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-prefix-management-05

2017-10-05 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-08

2017-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
kat...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Dan, > > On Tue, Sep 19, 2017 at 12:42 PM, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review result: Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-08

2017-09-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sfc-nsh-19

2017-08-31 Thread Dan Romascanu
, and apologies for the > delay in Ack-ing and responding. > > Please see inline. > > — > Carlos Pignataro, car...@cisco.com > > “Sometimes I use big words that I do not fully understand, to make myself > sound more photosynthesis." > > > On Aug 22, 2017, at 11:34 AM, Da

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sfc-nsh-19

2017-08-22 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Bier] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-07

2017-06-29 Thread Dan Romascanu
Just a short clarification on one point (or two). See in text. Regards, Dan > 3. On the other hand I am missing the relationship with other work items in > the >> BIER charter - there is no manageability section for example, there is no >> reference to the performance impact in networks.

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-architecture-07

2017-06-25 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-dcbench-methodology-12

2017-06-19 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-dcbench-methodology-07

2017-06-10 Thread Dan Romascanu
ne are some the comments / answer to your feedback. The parts without > answers mean they have been addressed. > > Again, thank you for spending the time to read this in this fine detail. > > Lucien > > > > On Thu, Jun 8, 2017 at 5:29 AM, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com

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