Re: [OPSAWG] Chasing IPR responses on draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-05-05 Thread wangzitao
CC to opsawg working group. -邮件原件- 发件人: wangzitao 发送时间: 2022年5月5日 15:52 收件人: 'Joe Clarke (jclarke)' ; adr...@olddog.co.uk; ron.even@gmail.com; liuc...@chinaunicom.cn; xuhl@chinatelecom.cn; oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; bin_...@comcast.com 抄送: opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; Wubo

[OPSAWG] 4026 as a downref: Document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-06

2022-05-05 Thread Adrian Farrel
Just chiming in on this thread. Don't be frightened of downrefs. They are just a small piece of process easily handled. Better to set the reference correctly. If it is necessary to read RFC 4026 in order to understand part of this document, then it is a normative reference. Otherwise, of

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-04.txt

2022-05-05 Thread tom petch
From: Jean Quilbeuf Sent: 29 April 2022 17:19 Dear Tom, Thank you very much for your comments. Here is the updated version: URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05.txt Status:

Re: [OPSAWG] [ippm] Heads up on draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-05-05 Thread Wubo (lana)
Hi Greg, Thanks for the comments. STAMP referenced as RFC 8762 has been added as one of PM measurement protocol. Please be aware this model is a network model and does not specifies the details of STAMP. Please check whether rev-08 addresses your concerns:

Re: [OPSAWG] [ippm] Heads up on draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-05-05 Thread Greg Mirsky
Hi Bo, thank you for your quick response to my comment and clarification. The updates fully address my comments. Regards, Greg On Thu, May 5, 2022 at 5:46 AM Wubo (lana) wrote: > Hi Greg, > > > > Thanks for the comments. STAMP referenced as RFC 8762 has been added as > one of PM measurement

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-05

2022-05-05 Thread Carsten Bormann
>>> * Would it make sense to further refine your contact leafs to check for the >>> MUST URI schemas? (They are URI schemes, not URI schemas.) It is generally a mistake to hardwire specific URI schemes in a specification that uses URIs to provide flexibility. (What if in a few years you would

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP Author : Kenneth Vaughn

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-05

2022-05-05 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
On 5/5/22 11:05, Carsten Bormann wrote: * Would it make sense to further refine your contact leafs to check for the MUST URI schemas? > (They are URI schemes, not URI schemas.) > > It is generally a mistake to hardwire specific URI schemes in a specification > that uses URIs to provide

Re: [OPSAWG] 4026 as a downref: Document shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-06

2022-05-05 Thread Adrian Farrel
Thanks for all the work Bo, We're just waiting on IPR responses from: ron.even@gmail.com liuc...@chinaunicom.cn xu...@chinatelecom.cn oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com And I'll need the chairs to set the Intended Status of the document in the Datatracker. Cheers, Adrian

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread Kenneth Vaughn
I have uploaded a new version of the "Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP". This version includes the following changes: Changed the name of the registry to the SNMP-TLSTM registry Updated reference to DTLS 1.3 to reflect the publication of RFC 9147 Clarified the first paragraph of

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread Jürgen Schönwälder
Before I go and check the details... [...] TLSTMv1.3 MUST only be used with (D)TLS version 1.2 and later. What does this MUST tell me? There is no definition of TLSTMv1.3 nor do we version MIB modules. I understand the intention of the statement but we need to be more careful about the

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread Kenneth Vaughn
> There is no definition of TLSTMv1.3 nor do we version MIB modules Agreed, This is old text that I missed from when this was intended to be a replacement to RFC 6353 rather than an update. I think it is best to just delete the sentence so the paragraph would now read "[RFC6353] stated that

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread Jürgen Schönwälder
We made the mistake by simply reusing the TLS hash algorithm for a different purpose. We now factor things out by having a separate registry for the hashing algorithms used to create certficate fingerprints. But why would we now tie this back to TLS hashing algorithms? In modern TLS, I think they

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-03.txt

2022-05-05 Thread Kenneth Vaughn
I have no real problem either way; unless I hear someone else argue for making it automatic in the next couple of days, I will delete the last two sentences of the first paragraph of the IANA Considerations so that it will read: This document requires the establishment of a new SNMP-TLSTM

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-08.txt

2022-05-05 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Model for Network and VPN Service Performance Monitoring Authors : Bo

Re: [OPSAWG] Further small issue with draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-05-05 Thread Wubo (lana)
Hi Adrian, Thanks for the review. We have submitted rev-08 to address this issue and also comments from YANG doctor Radek and Greg. Please see the diff:https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-08. Thanks, Bo -Original Message- From: Adrian Farrel

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm-07

2022-05-05 Thread Wubo (lana)
Hi Radek, Thanks for your helpful comments. We agree with your analysis and suggestions. It is acceptable to configure both PM types, although using both PM types is redundant. We have updated the YANG model as you suggested. Please see the diff:

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-05

2022-05-05 Thread Joe Clarke (jclarke)
* The description of the transparency-extension grouping is a tautology. This is one of my pet peeves. Can you add more flavor here? Fleshed out a tad. Thanks. Much better. * Would it make sense to further refine your contact leafs to check for the MUST URI schemas? I know what you

Re: [OPSAWG] Poll for IPR:draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-05-05 Thread Xu honglei
Hi Joe, No, I'm not aware of any IPR that applies to this draft. Thanks, Honglei Xu >> De : Joe Clarke (jclarke) Envoyé : mardi 1 mars >> 2022 00:11 À : Wubo (lana) om>; Qin Wu >> om>; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >> om>; Oscar González de Dios >> om>; Bin Wen >> Objet : Poll for IPR: