On Sat, Nov 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]>
wrote:

>
>
> On 15 November 2014 03:04, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 6:57 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]>
>> wrote:
>> > Hello everyone,
>> >
>> > Here is the proposed social media for "Browsing Wikipedia While Sailing
>> The
>> > South Pacific: The Goodall Family's Experience Offline Browsing" blog
>> post.
>> >
>> > Blog post:
>> >
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/
>> >
>> > t: No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family at sea tells us what it's like to use
>> > #OfflineWikipedia:
>> >
>> >
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/
>> >
>> Refining a bit to add some exotism ;) and to include the Kiwix Twitter
>> handle:
>>
>> No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family sailing the South Pacific tells us how
>> they use #OfflineWikipedia:
>>
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/
>> @KiwixOffline
>>
>>
>> > f/g: The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi
>> > access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #kiwix the
>> > offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from culture
>> to
>> > the fish they'd like to eat for dinner.
>> >
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/
>> >
>> Tweaked:
>>
>> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi
>> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix,
>> the offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from
>> culture to the fish they'd like to eat for dinner.
>>
>
> This reads quite oddly (possibly because "culture" is a far shorter clause
> than "fish they'd like to eat for dinner". How's this:
>
> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi access,
> traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the offline
> Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from exotic cultures to
> the fish they'd like for dinner.
>

Good point about "culture". But I don't really see where the post talks
about exotic cultures among its examples, so I would modify further:

The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi access,
traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the offline
Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from Greek mythology to
the fish they'd like for dinner.



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