Good points! Also, exotic is in the eye of the beholder -- my love of salted herring is not exotic in Amsterdam, but definitely unusual in Cairo.*
*Example purposes only, can't say I've ever cottoned to herring of any sort. On Sat, Nov 15, 2014 at 8:05 AM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]> wrote: > Good point - LGTM now. > > Joe > > On 15 November 2014 16:02, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote: > >> >> >> On Sat, Nov 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM, Joe Sutherland < >> [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> >>> >>> On 15 November 2014 03:04, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 6:57 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> >>>> wrote: >>>> > Hello everyone, >>>> > >>>> > Here is the proposed social media for "Browsing Wikipedia While >>>> Sailing The >>>> > South Pacific: The Goodall Family's Experience Offline Browsing" blog >>>> post. >>>> > >>>> > Blog post: >>>> > >>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>>> > >>>> > t: No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family at sea tells us what it's like to >>>> use >>>> > #OfflineWikipedia: >>>> > >>>> > >>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>>> > >>>> Refining a bit to add some exotism ;) and to include the Kiwix Twitter >>>> handle: >>>> >>>> No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family sailing the South Pacific tells us how >>>> they use #OfflineWikipedia: >>>> >>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>>> @KiwixOffline >>>> >>>> >>>> > f/g: The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without >>>> Wi-Fi >>>> > access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #kiwix >>>> the >>>> > offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from >>>> culture to >>>> > the fish they'd like to eat for dinner. >>>> > >>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>>> > >>>> Tweaked: >>>> >>>> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >>>> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, >>>> the offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from >>>> culture to the fish they'd like to eat for dinner. >>>> >>> >>> This reads quite oddly (possibly because "culture" is a far shorter >>> clause than "fish they'd like to eat for dinner". How's this: >>> >>> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >>> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the >>> offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from exotic >>> cultures to the fish they'd like for dinner. >>> >> >> Good point about "culture". But I don't really see where the post talks >> about exotic cultures among its examples, so I would modify further: >> >> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the >> offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from Greek >> mythology to the fish they'd like for dinner. >> >> >> >>> >>> >>>> >>>> > -- >>>> > Michael Guss >>>> > Research Analyst >>>> > Wikimediafoundation.org >>>> > [email protected] >>>> > >>>> > _______________________________________________ >>>> > Social-media mailing list >>>> > [email protected] >>>> > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>>> > >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> -- >>>> Tilman Bayer >>>> Senior Operations Analyst (Movement Communications) >>>> Wikimedia Foundation >>>> IRC (Freenode): HaeB >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Social-media mailing list >>>> [email protected] >>>> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>>> >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Joe Sutherland >>> Communications Volunteer >>> m: +45 50 28 40 84 | t: @jrbsu | w: jsutherland >>> <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Social-media mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>> >>> >> >> >> -- >> Tilman Bayer >> Senior Operations Analyst (Movement Communications) >> Wikimedia Foundation >> IRC (Freenode): HaeB >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Social-media mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >> >> > > > -- > Joe Sutherland > Communications Volunteer > m: +45 50 28 40 84 | t: @jrbsu | w: jsutherland > <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)> > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- Katherine Maher Chief Communications Officer Wikimedia Foundation 149 New Montgomery Street San Francisco, CA 94105 +1 (415) 839-6885 ext. 6635 +1 (415) 712 4873 [email protected]
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