Good point - LGTM now. Joe
On 15 November 2014 16:02, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote: > > > On Sat, Nov 15, 2014 at 5:14 AM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected] > > wrote: > >> >> >> On 15 November 2014 03:04, Tilman Bayer <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 6:57 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>> > Hello everyone, >>> > >>> > Here is the proposed social media for "Browsing Wikipedia While >>> Sailing The >>> > South Pacific: The Goodall Family's Experience Offline Browsing" blog >>> post. >>> > >>> > Blog post: >>> > >>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>> > >>> > t: No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family at sea tells us what it's like to use >>> > #OfflineWikipedia: >>> > >>> > >>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>> > >>> Refining a bit to add some exotism ;) and to include the Kiwix Twitter >>> handle: >>> >>> No Wi-Fi? No problem. A family sailing the South Pacific tells us how >>> they use #OfflineWikipedia: >>> >>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>> @KiwixOffline >>> >>> >>> > f/g: The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >>> > access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #kiwix the >>> > offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from >>> culture to >>> > the fish they'd like to eat for dinner. >>> > >>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/11/14/sailing-south-pacific-with-wikipedia-on-board-goodall-family/ >>> > >>> Tweaked: >>> >>> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >>> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, >>> the offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from >>> culture to the fish they'd like to eat for dinner. >>> >> >> This reads quite oddly (possibly because "culture" is a far shorter >> clause than "fish they'd like to eat for dinner". How's this: >> >> The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi >> access, traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the >> offline Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from exotic >> cultures to the fish they'd like for dinner. >> > > Good point about "culture". But I don't really see where the post talks > about exotic cultures among its examples, so I would modify further: > > The Goodall family spends most of their time at sea. Without Wi-Fi access, > traveling to foreign lands can be daunting. But with #Kiwix, the offline > Wikipedia software, the family looks up everything from Greek mythology to > the fish they'd like for dinner. > > > >> >> >>> >>> > -- >>> > Michael Guss >>> > Research Analyst >>> > Wikimediafoundation.org >>> > [email protected] >>> > >>> > _______________________________________________ >>> > Social-media mailing list >>> > [email protected] >>> > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>> > >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Tilman Bayer >>> Senior Operations Analyst (Movement Communications) >>> Wikimedia Foundation >>> IRC (Freenode): HaeB >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Social-media mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>> >> >> >> >> -- >> Joe Sutherland >> Communications Volunteer >> m: +45 50 28 40 84 | t: @jrbsu | w: jsutherland >> <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Social-media mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >> >> > > > -- > Tilman Bayer > Senior Operations Analyst (Movement Communications) > Wikimedia Foundation > IRC (Freenode): HaeB > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- Joe Sutherland Communications Volunteer m: +45 50 28 40 84 | t: @jrbsu | w: jsutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)>
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