On Wed, Aug 10, 2011 at 9:46 PM, Waqas Hussain <[email protected]> wrote:
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> Example 1 doesn't take things to their logical extreme.


Aside from the recommended possible simplifications, I notice that the
formatting of the send-receive examples (step 1 through 9) is not consistent
with the send-receive examples in other XMPP specs.  The formatting of the
XML examples ought to be fixed for consistency, or even broken into separate
CDATA blocks with text in between; it can still be done in a pretty compact
manner. (I figured out how to embed compact XML examples in section 4.5.2 of
XEP-0301)

Mark Rejhoonb

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