Hi Carol,

You included the answer for handling multiple types of users. Spell it out!
In your case, instead of writing "scanners", use "people doing the
scanning." Sure it's longer, but it removes ambiguity. I'll use a few extra
words for clarity any day of the week.


Thomas Johnson
Microline Technology Corp.
Traverse City, MI
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Sent: Wednesday, November 22, 2006 12:09 PM
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Subject: Re: [TCP] Ending use of end-user

Sean's comment made perfect sense, with, as he noted, some caveats:

So, instead of a passage like the following:

"The user establishes the settings for the end-user."

A passage like the following would be better:

"The administrator establishes the settings for the cashiers."

The problem occurs when there is no single user. For example, our
software runs on scanning devices in many "vertical" industries (healthcare,
financial, legal). I cannot say, "The administrator establishes the settings
for the *scanners*, i.e. the people doing the scanning, because
*scanner*can be a device or a person.

Cheers!

Carol


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