On Sat, Feb 02, 2019 at 06:10:21PM +0100, Alessandro DE LAURENZIS wrote:
> Dear developers,
> 
> Currently the latin motto "Ad astra per aspera" is translated as "to the 
> stars by aspiration", which sounds weird.
> 
> The literal translation from Wikipedia [1] would be "through hardships 
> to the stars", but here I'm proposing a rewording by A. J. Finn, in "The 
> Woman in the Window: A Novel" (cited in Wikipedia too), which I like 
> more: "Through adversity to the stars":
> 
> [...]

hi.

i should state that i know very little of latin before going any
further.

i agree "aspiration" looks like a mistake. i suspect the intention
was "asperity", which means harshness and rigour. there is a verb,
asperate, but i think it's a bit obsolete.

i'm a bit reluctant to just follow wikipedia blindly.  i think the
latin is pural, and "hardships" doesn;t sound awesome when plural.

also i prefer "by" to "through": since it's latin, a little archaicism
is good.

"adversity" would be easily understood and have the correct meaning
(i think). but the translation you recommend (by Finn) restructures
the phrase. i think it should begin "To the stars" (that's a minus
for wikipedia too). so "To the stars by adversity."

though i suspect "asperity" would have most of us reaching for our
dictionaries, it's not neccessarily a bad thing. it seems the
best fit to me.

jmc

> > Index: games/fortune/datfiles/fortunes2
> > ===================================================================
> > RCS file: /cvs/src/games/fortune/datfiles/fortunes2,v
> > retrieving revision 1.49
> > diff -u -p -u -p -r1.49 fortunes2
> > --- games/fortune/datfiles/fortunes2    25 Nov 2017 05:55:40 -0000      1.49
> > +++ games/fortune/datfiles/fortunes2    2 Feb 2019 16:50:16 -0000
> > @@ -7694,7 +7694,7 @@ Assume true for N, prove for N+1:
> >         it is true for all N+1 floors.
> >  QED.
> >  %
> > -Ad astra per aspera.  (To the stars by aspiration.)
> > +Ad astra per aspera.  (Through adversity to the stars.)
> >  %
> >  Adde parvum parvo manus acervus erit.
> >  [Add little to little and there will be a big pile.]
> [...]
> 
> Just my 2 cents.
> 
> [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Per_aspera_ad_astra
> 
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