Just a few nits from the fundwiab copy (grammar/spelling changes) in
order through the page:
"In the early December 2011 I'd looked though WIAB" -> "In early
December I looked through the WIAB"
"to get fully functional" -> "to get a fully functional"
"till 1 February" -> "by 1 February"
"why did Google specify" -> "why Google specified"
"I kindly ask" -> "I kindly asked"
"I had hired" -> "I hired"
"as Google Wave replacement" -> "as a Google Wave replacement"
"to get usable WIAB" -> "to have a usable WIAB"
"to get working" -> "to get a working"
"All donation" -> "All donations"
"will be spent only to WIAB development" -> "will be used only for
WIAB development"
"into main tree" -> "into the main tree"
"publish total collected" -> "publish the total collected"
"all spents" -> "all expenditures"
"If we could" -> "If we can"
"I'll try to agree with most active WIAB committers" -> "I'll try to
allow most active WIAB committers"

In the donations history "Decemember" -> "December"

This will give the page a better feel to a native English reader.

Also, not everybody who donates will necessarily want their name
listed in the donations history rather than just 'anonymous'.

On 17 January 2012 17:36, Kirill Kostyuchenko <[email protected]> wrote:
> Please apply attached patch to the main index.html.
>
> I added links to WaveImport utility and http://fundwiab.com site.

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