On 16 Aug 98, Suzanne wrote:

> >Jan Cohen wrote:
> >> I'd also like to know if my "defiance" link on the first page and
> >> "breakdown" link on the second page are intuitive enough, given the
> >> targeted audience I've chosen.
> >
> >> http://home.pb.net/~janfcohen/top.html

Missed the start of this thread, but am assuming you're looking for a 
general critique of the navigation and DHTML stuff you're using...

I found the splash screen a little confusing and unintuitive; had to move 
the mouse all round the screen to ascertain that the word "Defiance" was 
indeed a link. Because it looked like text, rather than the image it is, and 
because it's actually the least visible element on the page, it simply didn't 
look like a link.

The following page suffers from DHTML overkill, in my view -- too much 
animation going on at once for too little purpose.  It also took several long 
moments on my 56K connection for everything to finally scroll into place.  
If I were to use that effect at all (which is questionable, as it's already 
becoming a little cliched) I would have no more than one text element 
animated.

On the following page, I was confused by the phrase "kamera obscura" -- 
the device is called a "camera obscura", from the Latin. "Kamera" is 
German (and Norwegian and Finnish and Slavic...)
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Brent Eades, Almonte, Ontario
   E-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
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   Town of Almonte site: http://www.almonte.com/
   Business site: http://www.federalweb.com

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