Hey Edward, That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset. The T is particularly hard to recognize. Still, the symbol looks a lot snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still out there Tim Colson :). I do think the color scheme could use some adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now. I attached a screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
I think that's it for stylistic feedback. I'm not really the best at that. Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to make better use of its space. Thanks for working on this! I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :) peace, nathan On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hello All, > > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity > Tools logo. > > Here is my proposition so far: > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner] > > In case the image doesn't show: > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png > > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to start us > off with. > > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work. (Example: > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.) > > > Regards, > > Edward > > http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52 > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
