The gradient is pretty cool.

On Dec 14, 2007 9:19 PM, Claude Brisson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Some more -subjetive- feeback :
>
> I really prefer the T of the first version - much softer and lighter.
> And colors were good. Sthing very heavy in the second proposal, whereas
> the first one recalls me of sthing inbetween of a conceptual
> contemporary art artefact and a glass of wine... necessarily
> sympatico... subjective, I told you... what about working around the
> first proposal in the way I suggest here (only poorly crafted by means
> of ugly cuts and pastes from you image):
>
> http://people.apache.org/~cbrisson/ApacheVelocityTools.png
>
>
>    Claude
>
> Le mercredi 12 décembre 2007 à 17:54 -0800, Edward a écrit :
>
> > Hi,
> >
> > Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version:
> > [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner]
> > and a link for those who can't see it:
> > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png
> >
> > I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a
> > tongue :P (See the resemblance?)
> >
> > Also, here it is with the current template:
> >
> > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png
> >
> > The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you
> > could see the details.
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > Edward
> > On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> >
> > > Hey Edward,
> > >
> > > That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second
> > > to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset.  The T is
> > > particularly hard to recognize.  Still, the symbol looks a lot
> > > snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still
> > > out there Tim Colson :).   I do think the color scheme could use some
> > > adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now.  I attached a
> > > screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
> > >
> > > I think that's it for stylistic feedback.  I'm not really the best at
> > > that.  Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could
> > > probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to
> > > make better use of its space.
> > >
> > > Thanks for working on this!  I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :)
> > >
> > > peace,
> > > nathan
> > >
> > > On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > > > Hello All,
> > > >
> > > > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity
> > > > Tools logo.
> > > >
> > > > Here is my proposition so far:
> > > >
> > > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner]
> > > >
> > > > In case the image doesn't show:
> > > >
> > > >
> > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png
> > > >
> > > > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to
> > > start us
> > > > off with.
> > > >
> > > > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work.
> > > (Example:
> > > > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.)
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Regards,
> > > >
> > > > Edward
> > > >
> > > >
> > > http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52
> > > >
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