Some more -subjetive- feeback : I really prefer the T of the first version - much softer and lighter. And colors were good. Sthing very heavy in the second proposal, whereas the first one recalls me of sthing inbetween of a conceptual contemporary art artefact and a glass of wine... necessarily sympatico... subjective, I told you... what about working around the first proposal in the way I suggest here (only poorly crafted by means of ugly cuts and pastes from you image):
http://people.apache.org/~cbrisson/ApacheVelocityTools.png Claude Le mercredi 12 décembre 2007 à 17:54 -0800, Edward a écrit : > Hi, > > Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version: > [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner] > and a link for those who can't see it: > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png > > I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a > tongue :P (See the resemblance?) > > Also, here it is with the current template: > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png > > The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you > could see the details. > > Regards, > > Edward > On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Hey Edward, > > > > That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second > > to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset. The T is > > particularly hard to recognize. Still, the symbol looks a lot > > snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still > > out there Tim Colson :). I do think the color scheme could use some > > adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now. I attached a > > screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that. > > > > I think that's it for stylistic feedback. I'm not really the best at > > that. Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could > > probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to > > make better use of its space. > > > > Thanks for working on this! I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :) > > > > peace, > > nathan > > > > On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Hello All, > > > > > > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity > > > Tools logo. > > > > > > Here is my proposition so far: > > > > > > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner] > > > > > > In case the image doesn't show: > > > > > > > > http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png > > > > > > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to > > start us > > > off with. > > > > > > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work. > > (Example: > > > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.) > > > > > > > > > Regards, > > > > > > Edward > > > > > > > > http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52 > > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
