Hi,

Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version:
[image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner]
and a link for those who can't see it:
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png

I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a
tongue :P (See the resemblance?)

Also, here it is with the current template:

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png

The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you
could see the details.

Regards,

Edward
On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Hey Edward,
>
> That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second
> to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset.  The T is
> particularly hard to recognize.  Still, the symbol looks a lot
> snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still
> out there Tim Colson :).   I do think the color scheme could use some
> adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now.  I attached a
> screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
>
> I think that's it for stylistic feedback.  I'm not really the best at
> that.  Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could
> probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to
> make better use of its space.
>
> Thanks for working on this!  I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :)
>
> peace,
> nathan
>
> On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Hello All,
> >
> > I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity
> > Tools logo.
> >
> > Here is my proposition so far:
> >
> > [image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner]
> >
> > In case the image doesn't show:
> >
> >
> http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png
> >
> > Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to
> start us
> > off with.
> >
> > Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work.
> (Example:
> > Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.)
> >
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > Edward
> >
> >
> http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52
> >
>
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