On 31/05/18 04:23 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
On 01/06/2018 07:31, Michael Richardson wrote:

Toerless Eckert <[email protected]> wrote:
     > On Thu, May 31, 2018 at 03:07:15PM -0400, Michael Richardson wrote:
     >> > I would prefer to have the simple definition "ANI == systems that 
support
     >> > both BRSKI and ACP" in the doc itself. Threre is really no single 
authoritative
     >> > normative document for ANI, so it should simply be stated equally in 
BRSKI and
     >> > ACP. Rest of text is fine.
     >>
     >> I'm not getting what you are suggesting.
     >> I think you are saying that we shouldn't point at ACP for the ANI term, 
but
     >> rather define it ourselves?

     > Yes.

okay, I've copied text:

    ANI:  "Autonomic Network Infrastructure".  The ANI is the
          infrastructure to enable Autonomic Networks.  It includes ACP,
          BRSKI and GRASP.  Every Autonomic Network includes the ANI,
          but not every ANI network needs to include autonomic functions
          beyond the ANI (nor intent).  An ANI network without further
          autonomic functions can for example support secure zero touch 
bootstrap
          and stable connectivity for SDN networks - see
          [I-D.ietf-anima-stable-connectivity]


Wrong answer, IMHO.

draft-ietf-anima-reference-model defines the ANI at some length.
That should be the (informative) reference for basic terminology.

I think that you'd like us to change the text to say:

            <t hangText="ANI:">The Autonomic Network Infrastructure as
            defined by <xref target="I-D.ietf-anima-reference-model" />.
            This document details specific requirements for pledges,
            proxies and registrars when they are part of an ANI.</t>

is this correct?  Or did you want us to retain some other words above?


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