On 20/06/2018 03:38, Michael Richardson wrote: > On 31/05/18 04:23 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: >> On 01/06/2018 07:31, Michael Richardson wrote: >>> >>> Toerless Eckert <[email protected]> wrote: >>> > On Thu, May 31, 2018 at 03:07:15PM -0400, Michael Richardson wrote: >>> >> > I would prefer to have the simple definition "ANI == systems that >>> support >>> >> > both BRSKI and ACP" in the doc itself. Threre is really no single >>> authoritative >>> >> > normative document for ANI, so it should simply be stated equally >>> in BRSKI and >>> >> > ACP. Rest of text is fine. >>> >> >>> >> I'm not getting what you are suggesting. >>> >> I think you are saying that we shouldn't point at ACP for the ANI >>> term, but >>> >> rather define it ourselves? >>> >>> > Yes. >>> >>> okay, I've copied text: >>> >>> ANI: "Autonomic Network Infrastructure". The ANI is the >>> infrastructure to enable Autonomic Networks. It includes ACP, >>> BRSKI and GRASP. Every Autonomic Network includes the ANI, >>> but not every ANI network needs to include autonomic functions >>> beyond the ANI (nor intent). An ANI network without further >>> autonomic functions can for example support secure zero touch >>> bootstrap >>> and stable connectivity for SDN networks - see >>> [I-D.ietf-anima-stable-connectivity] >>> >> >> Wrong answer, IMHO. >> >> draft-ietf-anima-reference-model defines the ANI at some length. >> That should be the (informative) reference for basic terminology. > > I think that you'd like us to change the text to say: > > <t hangText="ANI:">The Autonomic Network Infrastructure as > defined by <xref target="I-D.ietf-anima-reference-model" />. > This document details specific requirements for pledges, > proxies and registrars when they are part of an ANI.</t> > > is this correct? Or did you want us to retain some other words above? >
Personally, I'm happy with the reference (and with it being informational). Duplication of definitions always creates a risk of confusion. Brian _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
