Hi Alice, 

This document looks great as well. I only have a few suggested editorial 
changes. See the attached RFC diff.

Thanks,
Acee


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> On Jul 11, 2025, at 5:37 PM, Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> Acee,
> 
> Thank you for your reply; the files have been updated accordingly. Please 
> refresh the same URLs as below 
> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-lastrfcdiff.html shows only the 
> most recent changes). 
> 
> RFC Editor/ar
> 
>> On Jul 11, 2025, at 1:06 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Alice, 
>> 
>>> On Jul 11, 2025, at 3:48 PM, Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Acee,
>>> 
>>> We have updated the authors' contact information as requested. The revised 
>>> files are here (please refresh):
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.txt
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.pdf
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.xml
>>> 
>>> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-diff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-auth48diff.html
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>> 
>>> This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-lastrfcdiff.html
>>> 
>>> As mentioned in a separate mail re: 9815, we suggest considering this 
>>> update to the title (remove hyphen and add acronym).
>>> 
>>> -- 9816
>>> Current: Usage and Applicability of BGP Link-State Shortest Path First 
>>> (SPF) Routing in Data Centers
>>> Perhaps: Usage and Applicability of BGP Link State (BGP-LS) Shortest Path 
>>> First (SPF) Routing in Data Centers
>> 
>> Sure,
>> 
>> Thanks
>> Acee
>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> We will wait to hear from you again and from your coauthors
>>> before continuing the publication process. This page shows 
>>> the AUTH48 status of your document:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9816
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> RFC Editor/ar
>>> 
>>>> On Jul 10, 2025, at 4:17 AM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Alice, 
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jul 9, 2025, at 3:19 PM, Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Acee, Ketan (as AD), 
>>>>> 
>>>>> *AD - Please review this change and let us know if you approve (changed 
>>>>> from "MUST" to "must" per Acee's reply to #5).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:                                                                 
>>>>>              
>>>>> The Link Local/Remote Identifiers of the peering interfaces MUST be       
>>>>>           
>>>>> used in the link NLRI as described in section 5.2.2 of                    
>>>>>           
>>>>> [I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf].      
>>>>> 
>>>>> Current:
>>>>> The Link Local/Remote Identifiers of the peering interfaces must be       
>>>>>           
>>>>> used in the link NLRI as described in Section 5.2.2 of [RFC9815].
>>>> 
>>>> Sure. This is an "Informational" status document. 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Acee,
>>>>> Thank you for your reply. My apologies for the delay. Please see the 
>>>>> follow-ups below. The revised files are here (please refresh):
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.html
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.txt
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.pdf
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816.xml
>>>>> 
>>>>> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-diff.html
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>>>>> 
>>>>> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-auth48diff.html
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9816-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by 
>>>>> side)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Re: #4, we updated to the text you provided except for expanding "SPF", 
>>>>> as it has already been expanded within the document and is used earlier 
>>>>> within the same sentence without expansion. If you prefer otherwise, 
>>>>> please let us know.
>>>>> 
>>>>> FYI, in Section 2, this has been updated as follows; please let us know 
>>>>> if you prefer otherwise.
>>>>> Old:   BGP-SPF [RFC9815]
>>>>> New:   BGP-LS SPF [RFC9815]
>>>> 
>>>> Sure - just not BGP - ....
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Acee
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> We will wait to hear from you again and from your coauthors
>>>>> before continuing the publication process. This page shows 
>>>>> the AUTH48 status of your document:
>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9816
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>> RFC Editor/ar
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Jul 3, 2025, at 4:58 PM, Acee Lindem <acee.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi RFC Editor, 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you for your work on this document. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jul 1, 2025, at 2:21 AM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] BGP-LS and SPF
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> a) Would you like to update the title of the document as shown below 
>>>>>>> or otherwise, to more closely match how "BGP-LS" and "SPF"
>>>>>>> are handled in the title of RFC-to-be 9815?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> Usage and Applicability of BGP Link-State Shortest Path 
>>>>>>> Routing (BGP-SPF) in Data Centers
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Option A:
>>>>>>> Usage and Applicability of BGP Link-State 
>>>>>>> Shortest Path First (SPF) Routing in Data Centers
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Use option A consistent with the base document - "BGP Link-State 
>>>>>> Shortest Path First (SPF) Routing" in RFC 9815. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Option B:
>>>>>>> Usage and Applicability of BGP - Link State (BGP-LS) 
>>>>>>> Shortest Path First (SPF) Routing in Data Centers
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> b) To match how the companion document expands "BGP-LS" and
>>>>>>> "SPF", may we update the Abstract and Introduction as shown
>>>>>>> below for consistency?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original (Abstract):
>>>>>>> This document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP Link-State
>>>>>>> Shortest Path First (BGP-SPF) extensions in data center networks
>>>>>>> utilizing Clos or Fat-Tree topologies.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> This document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP - Link State
>>>>>>> (BGP-LS) Shortest Path First (SPF) extensions in data center networks
>>>>>>> utilizing Clos or Fat Tree topologies.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Use;
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This document discusses the usage and applicability of BGP Link State
>>>>>> (BGP-LS) Shortest Path First (SPF) extensions in data center networks
>>>>>> utilizing Clos or Fat Tree topologies.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>> Original (Introduction): 
>>>>>>> This document complements [I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf] by discussing the
>>>>>>> applicability of the BGP-SPF technology in a simple and fairly common
>>>>>>> deployment scenario, which is described in Section 3.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> This document complements [RFC9815] by discussing the applicability of
>>>>>>> the BGP - Link State (BGP-LS) Shortest Path First (SPF) technology in 
>>>>>>> a simple and fairly common deployment scenario, which is described in 
>>>>>>> Section 3.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Use:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> This document complements [RFC9815] by discussing the applicability of
>>>>>> the BGP Link State (BGP-LS) Shortest Path First (SPF) technology in 
>>>>>> a simple and fairly common deployment scenario, which is described in 
>>>>>> Section 3.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> c) Throughout the text, we note "BGP-SPF" vs. "BGP SPF". "BGP SPF" is
>>>>>>> used both in the companion document and the IANA registry at
>>>>>>> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-spf/>. Would you like to update
>>>>>>> each instance of "BGP-SPF" to "BGP SPF" for consistency? See one
>>>>>>> example below:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> The document is intended to provide simplified guidance 
>>>>>>> for the deployment of BGP-SPF extensions.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> The document is intended to provide simplified guidance 
>>>>>>> for the deployment of BGP SPF extensions.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Use "BGP SPF" then. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We updated "RFC 5580" to "RFC 5880" in the following
>>>>>>> sentence, and elsewhere in the document where "BFD" is
>>>>>>> referenced, as "BFD" is defined in RFC 5880 and not mentioned
>>>>>>> in RFC 5580. If this is not correct, please let us know.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> This document also assumes knowledge of data center routing
>>>>>>> protocols such as BGP [RFC4271], BGP-SPF [I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf], OSPF
>>>>>>> [RFC2328] [RFC5340], as well as data center Operations,
>>>>>>> Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) protocols like Link Layer
>>>>>>> Discovery Protocol (LLDP) [RFC4957] and Bi- Directional Forwarding
>>>>>>> Detection (BFD) [RFC5580].
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>> This document also assumes knowledge of data center routing
>>>>>>> protocols such as BGP [RFC4271], BGP-SPF [RFC9815], and OSPF
>>>>>>> [RFC2328] [RFC5340] as well as data center Operations,
>>>>>>> Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) protocols like the Link Layer
>>>>>>> Discovery Protocol (LLDP) [RFC4957] and Bidirectional Forwarding
>>>>>>> Detection (BFD) [RFC5580].
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Sure - good catch. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] "SPF" is not mentioned in RFC 9552. Should a different 
>>>>>>> RFC be
>>>>>>> referenced or was "OSPF" perhaps intended?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> The BGP-SPF modifications allow BGP to overcome these limitations.
>>>>>>> Furthermore, using the BGP-LS Network Layer Reachability Information
>>>>>>> (NLRI) format allows the BGP-SPF data to be advertised for nodes,
>>>>>>> links, and prefixes in the BGP routing domain and used for Short-
>>>>>>> Path-First (SPF) computations [RFC9552].
>>>>>>> -->    
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Use:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> The BGP-SPF modifications allow BGP to overcome these limitations.
>>>>>> Furthermore, using the BGP-LS Network Layer Reachability Information
>>>>>> (NLRI) format [RFC9552] allows the BGP-SPF data to be advertised for 
>>>>>> nodes,
>>>>>> links, and prefixes in the BGP routing domain and used for Short-
>>>>>> Path-First (SPF) computations.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We see that the approved I-D (v22) contains one instance
>>>>>>> of a keyword ("MUST" in Section 5.5.1). Is this intentional? If
>>>>>>> so, we will add the typical paragraph from BCP 14 regarding use
>>>>>>> of keywords after the Introduction and add RFCs 2119 and 8174 to
>>>>>>> the Normative References section. Otherwise, we will update
>>>>>>> "MUST" to "must".
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> The Link Local/Remote Identifiers of the peering interfaces MUST be
>>>>>>> used in the link NLRI as described in section 5.2.2 of
>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-lsvr-bgp-spf].
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please change to "must" for BCP. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] Is "BGP-LS SPF Topology" correct or should it perhaps be
>>>>>>> "BGP-LS-SPF Topology" for consistency?
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> 5.5.2  BGP-LS SPF Topology Visibility for Management
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> 5.5.2  BGP-LS-SPF Topology Visibility for Management
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ok. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] Would repeating "Non" make this section title more clear?
>>>>>>> The meaning seems to be applicability to topologies that are 
>>>>>>> neither Clos nor Fat Tree topologies.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>> 6.  Non-CLOS/FAT Tree Topology Applicability
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>> 6.  Non-Clos / Fat Tree Topology Applicability
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>> 6.  Non-Clos / Non-Fat-Tree Topology Applicability
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Leave as: 
>>>>>> 6.  Non-Clos / Fat Tree Topology Applicability
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the following terms for
>>>>>>> consistency. Please let us know of any objections.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> BGP-LS Node NLRI Attribute SPF Status TLV ->
>>>>>>> BGP-LS-SPF Node NLRI Attribute SPF Status TLV (per the companion doc)
>>>>>>> BGP-LS SPF SAFI -> BGP-LS-SPF SAFI (per the companion doc)
>>>>>>> Clos Topologies -> Clos topologies
>>>>>>> Fat-Tree -> Fat Tree (per use in the RFC Series)
>>>>>>> link NLRI -> Link NLRI (per RFC 9552)
>>>>>>> Route Controllers -> route controllers (per companion document)
>>>>>>> Route Reflectors -> route reflectors (per companion document)
>>>>>>> Spine Nodes -> spine nodes
>>>>>>> Unicast -> unicast
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ok.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have updated the expansions for the following
>>>>>>> abbreviations to reflect the form on the right for consistency with 
>>>>>>> the companion document and/or RFC Series.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Bi-Directional Forwarding Detection (BFD) -> 
>>>>>>> Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ok. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Equal-Cost Multi-Path (ECMP) -> Equal-Cost Multipath (ECMP)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ok. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Top-Of-Rack (ToR) -> Top-of-Rack (ToR)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Ok. 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>>>>> online 
>>>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>>> typically
>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: 
>>>>>>> - blackhole
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Replace "blackhole" with "routes to unreachable destinations". 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated
>>>>>>> for clarity.  While the NIST website
>>>>>>> <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/
>>>>>>> nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
>>>>>>> indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous.
>>>>>>> "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> "usual BGP underlays" and "classical BGP routing". 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please update my contact information with a new affiliation:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Acee Lindem
>>>>>> Arrcus, Inc. 
>>>>>> 301 Midenhall Way
>>>>>> Cary, NC 27513
>>>>>> United States of America
>>>>>> Email: acee.i...@gmail.com
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Acee
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> RFC Editor/kc/ar
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jun 30, 2025, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Updated 2025/06/30
>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>> RFC9816 (draft-ietf-lsvr-applicability-22)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Title            : Usage and Applicability of BGP Link-State Shortest 
>>>>>>> Path Routing (BGP-SPF) in Data Centers
>>>>>>> Author(s)        : K. Patel, A. Lindem, S. Zandi, G. Dawra, J. Dong
>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Jie Dong, Acee Lindem
>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
>>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
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