RFC Editors, thank you for your update incorporating our requests.
I am basically fine with all changes.
I just noticed two minor glitches that crept in with them, which could
be fixed as follows.
Section 8.7:
OLD
Passwords generated from user generated entropy
NEW
Passwords generated from user-generated entropy
or even better:
NEW:
Passwords generated from user-supplied entropy
Section 9:
OLD
arch
NEW
arc
Still, if the other authors agree, I would not mind if these two items
are kept unchanged.
David
On 14.07.25 18:34, Alanna Paloma wrote:
Hi Authors and Deb*,
*Deb (AD) - Thank you for your approval of those updates. It has been noted on
the AUTH48 status page:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9810
Authors - We have updated the files per the additional changes sent.
As these changes included updating “end entity” to “EE” in some artwork, please
provide us with updated SVG for the artwork in Sections 3.1.3, 4.2.2.2, and
5.3.22 (two in this section) and Appendices C.4 and D.5. We have made this
update to the ascii-art but are unable to update the svg itself (i.e., this
update can be seen in the diff files and TXT output file but not in the HTML
and PDF output files).
The files have been posted here (please refresh):
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810.pdf
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810.xml
The relevant diff files are posted here:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810-auth48diff.html (all AUTH48
changes)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 changes
side by side)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff diff
between last version and this)
https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9810-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between
last version and this)
Thank you,
RFC Editor/ap
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