I agree with David.
I am ok with the two final changes he is suggesting for 9810 (the arch to arc
in section 9) and (using user-supplied in section 8.7).
Thank you for all your work!
John Gray
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Subject: Re: [EXTERNAL] [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9810
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RFC Editors, thank you for your update incorporating our requests.
I am basically fine with all changes.
I just noticed two minor glitches that crept in with them, which could be fixed
as follows.
Section 8.7:
OLD
Passwords generated from user generated entropy
NEW
Passwords generated from user-generated entropy
or even better:
NEW:
Passwords generated from user-supplied entropy
Section 9:
OLD
arch
NEW
arc
Still, if the other authors agree, I would not mind if these two items are kept
unchanged.
David
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