I'm approving the doc

On Thu, Jul 24, 2025, 14:53 Mishra, Sanjay <sanjay.mis...@verizon.com>
wrote:

> +Nir Sopher <nirsop...@gmail.com>
>
> Hi all - I'm adding Nir on his GMAIL email as he may not have seen his
> n...@apache.org email that is on the draft.
>
> @Nir Sopher <nirsop...@gmail.com> Please see the email thread and respond
> at your earliest convenience.
>
> Thank you
> Sanjay
>
> On Mon, Jul 21, 2025 at 10:48 PM Sarah Tarrant <
> starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi Ben,
>>
>> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48
>> status page for this document (see
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e=
>> ).
>>
>> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48
>> status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication
>> process.
>>
>> Thank you,
>> RFC Editor/st
>>
>> > On Jul 21, 2025, at 2:04 PM, Ben Rosenblum <b...@rosenblum.dev> wrote:
>> >
>> > I approve the document. Thank you, Sarah!
>> >
>> > Ben
>> >
>> > On 7/21/2025 9:43 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> >> Hi Andrew,
>> >> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48
>> status page for this document (see
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e=
>> ).
>> >> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48
>> status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication
>> process.
>> >> Thank you,
>> >> RFC Editor/st
>> >>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 12:38 PM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>> >>>
>> >>> Sarah,
>> >>>   Once again, thank you so much for working with us on this.  I have
>> reviewed the document and approve.
>> >>>
>> >>> Andrew Ryan
>> >>>
>> >>> On 7/18/2025 1:08 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> >>>> Hi Andrew,
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly
>> and have no further questions.
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do
>> not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any
>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form.
>> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the
>> publication process.
>> >>>>
>> >>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.txt&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=Yy_n0pjdcbyGINdqqo78xahPXlhiGNc2si_jupQ_w_0&e=
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.pdf&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=yCLRH9lrO8ySKY0GfiS7GPyMb39diJNmsvVU_qH2S8c&e=
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=MrtwWOKVtBRwSaOMJqxS0vX3tJA4cFeNebooaIei2lI&e=
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.xml&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=R7rJB5-T939fIuGVlQe9L5XrsjXCmvLZIBkL5B4zByI&e=
>> >>>>
>> >>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Ddiff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=v7AK0d5qcf1xoOGKOWoHvEhHPHGoRwbQb01KEaf4hmI&e=
>> (comprehensive diff)
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Dauth48diff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=VKQj14cL9sepdnmeFVTiKvxLuF1gW7mgmgZd8FgG4wo&e=
>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>> >>>>
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>> view the most recent version.
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>> >>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>> >>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e=
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Thank you,
>> >>>> RFC Editor/st
>> >>>>
>> >>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 11:55 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>> >>>>>
>> >>>>> Sarah,
>> >>>>>   I am glad that the format was easy.  Please see answers inline.
>> Thank you very much for your collaboration on this, it is greatly
>> appreciated.
>> >>>>>
>> >>>>> Andrew Ryan
>> >>>>>
>> >>>>> On 7/18/2025 12:26 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> >>>>>> Hi Andrew, Ben, and Nir,
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> Andrew - Thank you for your reply and updated XML file. Sending an
>> updated XML really speeds up the turnaround during AUTH48, especially with
>> these more significant terminology updates.
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> We have a few followup questions/comments:
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> A) Regarding:
>> >>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are
>> not
>> >>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>> >>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where
>> >>>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G.,
>> Roskin, R.,
>> >>>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>> >>>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>> >>>>>>>>              publication)", <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_document_open-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=qcJvZoqBw-LRAayH0sGqWgMdvYE5Q-KkKjtpe-WzVkM&e=
>> >>>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra,
>> S.,
>> >>>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching
>> Request
>> >>>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4
>> >>>>>>>>              October 2019, <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_product_open-2Dcache-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=3bJrpgTW4v3Hy1yHCQjtqSiB7fYyWqXSQ3sc2koTq-E&e=
>> >>>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__opencaching.svta.org_&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=gMxEpeLepdyiTUVETw0ntKT_OKiZiIBDT2ZCPpbmYNI&e=
>> >.
>> >>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>> AR: Perhaps we should reference these documents in the
>> introduction, to highlight that
>> >>>>>>> these are related.
>> >>>>>>> BR - I'm fine with removing the references
>> >>>>>> There appears to be conflicting guidance from Andrew and Ben for
>> this. Please confer and let us know how we may update.
>> >>>>> Apologies for not clarifying/updating the PDF to reflect the
>> outcome:  I am AR in this sense, and I agree with BR (Ben) about removing
>> the non-cited references.
>> >>>>>
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> B) Regarding:
>> >>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this
>> document
>> >>>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container
>> for
>> >>>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
>> >>>>>>>> content that surrounds it" (
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__authors.ietf.org_en_rfcxml-2Dvocabulary-23aside&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=Hi5ORHYUp6kBRh6540mzqlkAcPoHj54_V6XCrJlpklI&e=
>> ).
>> >>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>> AR: this suggestion is unclear to me
>> >>>>>> Apologies for the lack of clarity. We typically ask this when we
>> see text led by "Note:" or "Note that", which would indent the text a bit.
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> For this document, we see "Note:" in Section 2. Would you like us
>> to format with the aside element?
>> >>>>> Thank you for the clarification.  This seems like a good formatting
>> suggestion, can we please utilize the aside element for this Note?
>> >>>>>
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh):
>> >>>>>>
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>> >>>>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.pdf&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=yCLRH9lrO8ySKY0GfiS7GPyMb39diJNmsvVU_qH2S8c&e=
>> >>>>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=MrtwWOKVtBRwSaOMJqxS0vX3tJA4cFeNebooaIei2lI&e=
>> >>>>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.xml&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=R7rJB5-T939fIuGVlQe9L5XrsjXCmvLZIBkL5B4zByI&e=
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):
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>> (comprehensive diff)
>> >>>>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Dauth48diff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=VKQj14cL9sepdnmeFVTiKvxLuF1gW7mgmgZd8FgG4wo&e=
>> (AUTH48 changes only)
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to
>> view the most recent version.
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>> >>>>>>
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e=
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>> Thank you,
>> >>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>> >>>>>>
>> >>>>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 9:53 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote:
>> >>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>> Greetings,
>> >>>>>>>   We reviewed the feedback you supplied and have
>> considered/incorporated them. Please find an XML document with changes and
>> approval, along with a PDF document which outlines the notes on the
>> feedback. Please let me know if this is acceptable and if there are any
>> additional things I can do to facilitate. Thank you
>> >>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>> >>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>> On 7/3/2025 9:51 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote:
>> >>>>>>>> Hi Andrew,
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>> I'll be on the lookout for your email!
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>> Thank you,
>> >>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>> >>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> On Jul 3, 2025, at 8:47 AM, Andrew Ryan <and...@andrewnryan.com>
>> wrote:
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> Sarah,
>> >>>>>>>>>   Thank you for the followup.  We are currently reviewing the
>> questions and should have feedback soon.  Thank you again.
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> Andrew Ryan
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> On Thu, Jul 3, 2025 at 9:17 AM Sarah Tarrant <
>> starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> >>>>>>>>> Authors,
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the
>> questions below and your review of the document before continuing with the
>> publication process.
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>> Thank you,
>> >>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st
>> >>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 5:13 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve
>> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
>> appear in
>> >>>>>>>>>> the title) for use on
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_search&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=mRoLm4BB421vOCnkM7E4H8hLhE1JU-53kn5qvYP54rE&e=
>> . -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Do the extensions define or does this
>> specification define "a set
>> >>>>>>>>>> of additional Capability Objects..."?
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Current:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   The Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) Capacity
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Capability Advertisement Extensions define a set of
>> additional
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current
>> downstream
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the
>> delegating
>> >>>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation
>> decisions.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   This specification defines a set of additional
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects that provide information about current
>> downstream
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the
>> delegating
>> >>>>>>>>>>   upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation
>> decisions.
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] There are several lists for properties
>> throughout the
>> >>>>>>>>>> document. If the "Type" and "Mandatory-to-Specify" fields only
>> >>>>>>>>>> contain one word and a period, may we remove the period? We
>> note
>> >>>>>>>>>> that this document follows the formatting style in RFC 8008;
>> >>>>>>>>>> however, our current practice is to remove the punctuation if a
>> >>>>>>>>>> description only contains one word (see similar examples in
>> RFCs
>> >>>>>>>>>> 9538 and 9677). Please let us know your preference.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> One example
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Current:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section
>> 2.1.1.1).
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Type:  String.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Property:  type
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Description:  A valid telemetry source type (see Section
>> 2.1.1.1).
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Type:  String
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>      Mandatory-to-Specify:  Yes
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] For consistency, should "Telemetry Capability"
>> be updated
>> >>>>>>>>>> as "the Telemetry Capability Object" in the following sentence?
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Original:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability
>> >>>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>> >>>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability
>> Object,
>> >>>>>>>>>>   including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to
>> >>>>>>>>>>   a footprint.
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that Table 1 includes a description of
>> the
>> >>>>>>>>>> "generic" source type, whereas Table 4 and the IANA registry do
>> >>>>>>>>>> not. Should the description be added to Table 4 and the IANA
>> >>>>>>>>>> registry? In Section 2.1.1.1, should Table 1 be replaced with a
>> >>>>>>>>>> link to Table 4 to avoid duplication?
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 2.1.1.1):
>> >>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry
>> Source
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Object types is limited to a single type: Generic (see
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Section 3.2.1).
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps A:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry
>> Source
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Types is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in
>> Section 3.2.1).
>> >>>>>>>>>> or
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps B:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   At the time of this writing, the "CDNI Telemetry Source
>> Types" registry
>> >>>>>>>>>>   is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section
>> 3.2.1).
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> ...
>> >>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 3.2):
>> >>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Reference |
>> >>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   | generic     | RFC 9808  |
>> >>>>>>>>>>   +=============+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>>  +=============+=======================================+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   | Source Type | Description                           |
>> Reference |
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>>  +=============+=======================================+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   | generic     | An object that allows for             | RFC
>> 9808  |
>> >>>>>>>>>>   |             | advertisement of generic data sources |
>>      |
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>>  +=============+=======================================+===========+
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Table 4
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries
>> are not
>> >>>>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed
>> >>>>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know
>> where
>> >>>>>>>>>> they may be added in the text.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   [OC-CII]   Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G.,
>> Roskin, R.,
>> >>>>>>>>>>              and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights -
>> >>>>>>>>>>              Functional Specification (Placeholder before
>> >>>>>>>>>>              publication)", <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_document_open-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=qcJvZoqBw-LRAayH0sGqWgMdvYE5Q-KkKjtpe-WzVkM&e=
>> >>>>>>>>>>              caching-capacity-interface/>.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   [OC-RR]    Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E.,
>> Mishra, S.,
>> >>>>>>>>>>              Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching
>> Request
>> >>>>>>>>>>              Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1,
>> 4
>> >>>>>>>>>>              October 2019, <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_product_open-2Dcache-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=3bJrpgTW4v3Hy1yHCQjtqSiB7fYyWqXSQ3sc2koTq-E&e=
>> >>>>>>>>>>              request-routing-functional-specification/>.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   [OCWG]     "Open Caching Home Page", <
>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__opencaching.svta.org_&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=gMxEpeLepdyiTUVETw0ntKT_OKiZiIBDT2ZCPpbmYNI&e=
>> >.
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to
>> be used
>> >>>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us
>> know if/how they
>> >>>>>>>>>> may be made consistent.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   capability object type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Capability Objects
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   capacity limit-types
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Capacity Limits
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CDNI Capacity Limit Types
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit Object
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimit object
>> >>>>>>>>>>   CapacityLimits Capability Object
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   FCI capability
>> >>>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capability
>> >>>>>>>>>>   FCI.Capabilities
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   limit-type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   limit type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Limit Type
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Payload types
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Payload Types
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability object
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Capability Object
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source
>> >>>>>>>>>>   telemetry source
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry sources
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   telemetry source type
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric Object
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Metric objects
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source Object
>> >>>>>>>>>>   Telemetry Source object
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> b) Should the payload types in the following titles be updated
>> to
>> >>>>>>>>>> match the payload types listed in Table 3?
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Original:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI Telemetry Payload Type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI Capacity Limits Payload Type
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>> >>>>>>>>>>   3.1.1.  CDNI FCI.Telemetry Payload Type
>> >>>>>>>>>>   3.1.2.  CDNI FCI.CapacityLimits Payload Type
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - We updated the following expansions to
>> the form on
>> >>>>>>>>>> the right for consistency within this document and/or the RFC
>> >>>>>>>>>> Series.  Please let us know of any objections.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) ->
>> >>>>>>>>>>    Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Footprints & Capabilities Advertisement Interface (FCI) ->
>> >>>>>>>>>>    Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI)
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Time To Live (TTL) -> Time to Live (TTL)
>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
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>> of any sourcecode
>> >>>>>>>>>> element should be set.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
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>> ).
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>> >
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>> >>>>>>>>>> -->
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
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>> >>>>>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>> >>>>>>>>>> RFC9808 (draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12)
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>> Title            : CDNI Capacity Capability Advertisement
>> Extensions
>> >>>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : A. Ryan, B. Rosenblum, N. Sopher
>> >>>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Kevin J. Ma, Sanjay Mishra
>> >>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Gorry Fairhurst, Mike Bishop
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >>>>>>> <AUTH48_ RFC-to-be 9808
>> _draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-12_ for your
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