Hi Nir, Ben, and Andrew, Nir - Thank you for the clarification!
All - We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808 Thank you for your attention and guidance during the AUTH48 process. We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time. Sincerely, RFC Editor/st > On Jul 29, 2025, at 1:52 PM, Nir Sopher <nirsop...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Thank you Sarah, > Please leave the email address as is (the apache one) > Thanks, > Nir > > On Fri, Jul 25, 2025, 06:20 Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > Hi Nir, > > Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status > page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9808). > > Would you like your contact info updated in the draft? > > Current: > Nir B. Sopher > Qwilt > 6, Ha'harash > Hod HaSharon 4524079 > Israel > Email: n...@apache.org <mailto:n...@apache.org> > > Perhaps: > Nir B. Sopher > Qwilt > 6, Ha'harash > Hod HaSharon 4524079 > Israel > Email: nirsop...@gmail.com <mailto:nirsop...@gmail.com> > > Sincerely, > RFC Editor/st > > > On Jul 25, 2025, at 2:17 AM, Nir Sopher <nirsop...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > I'm approving the doc > > > > On Thu, Jul 24, 2025, 14:53 Mishra, Sanjay <sanjay.mis...@verizon.com> > > wrote: > > +Nir Sopher > > > > Hi all - I'm adding Nir on his GMAIL email as he may not have seen his > > n...@apache.org email that is on the draft. > > > > @Nir Sopher Please see the email thread and respond at your earliest > > convenience. > > > > Thank you > > Sanjay > > > > On Mon, Jul 21, 2025 at 10:48 PM Sarah Tarrant > > <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Hi Ben, > > > > Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status > > page for this document (see > > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e= > > ). > > > > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 > > status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication > > process. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/st > > > > > On Jul 21, 2025, at 2:04 PM, Ben Rosenblum <b...@rosenblum.dev> wrote: > > > > > > I approve the document. Thank you, Sarah! > > > > > > Ben > > > > > > On 7/21/2025 9:43 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote: > > >> Hi Andrew, > > >> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 > > >> status page for this document (see > > >> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e= > > >> ). > > >> We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 > > >> status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication > > >> process. > > >> Thank you, > > >> RFC Editor/st > > >>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 12:38 PM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote: > > >>> > > >>> Sarah, > > >>> Once again, thank you so much for working with us on this. I have > > >>> reviewed the document and approve. > > >>> > > >>> Andrew Ryan > > >>> > > >>> On 7/18/2025 1:08 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote: > > >>>> Hi Andrew, > > >>>> > > >>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly and > > >>>> have no further questions. > > >>>> > > >>>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do > > >>>> not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with > > >>>> any further updates or with your approval of the document in its > > >>>> current form. We will await approvals from each author prior to moving > > >>>> forward in the publication process. > > >>>> > > >>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh): > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.txt&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=Yy_n0pjdcbyGINdqqo78xahPXlhiGNc2si_jupQ_w_0&e= > > >>>> > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.pdf&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=yCLRH9lrO8ySKY0GfiS7GPyMb39diJNmsvVU_qH2S8c&e= > > >>>> > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=MrtwWOKVtBRwSaOMJqxS0vX3tJA4cFeNebooaIei2lI&e= > > >>>> > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.xml&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=R7rJB5-T939fIuGVlQe9L5XrsjXCmvLZIBkL5B4zByI&e= > > >>>> > > >>>> > > >>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Ddiff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=v7AK0d5qcf1xoOGKOWoHvEhHPHGoRwbQb01KEaf4hmI&e= > > >>>> (comprehensive diff) > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Dauth48diff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=VKQj14cL9sepdnmeFVTiKvxLuF1gW7mgmgZd8FgG4wo&e= > > >>>> (AUTH48 changes only) > > >>>> > > >>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view > > >>>> the most recent version. > > >>>> > > >>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > > >>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e= > > >>>> > > >>>> > > >>>> Thank you, > > >>>> RFC Editor/st > > >>>> > > >>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 11:55 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote: > > >>>>> > > >>>>> Sarah, > > >>>>> I am glad that the format was easy. Please see answers inline. > > >>>>> Thank you very much for your collaboration on this, it is greatly > > >>>>> appreciated. > > >>>>> > > >>>>> Andrew Ryan > > >>>>> > > >>>>> On 7/18/2025 12:26 PM, Sarah Tarrant wrote: > > >>>>>> Hi Andrew, Ben, and Nir, > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Andrew - Thank you for your reply and updated XML file. Sending an > > >>>>>> updated XML really speeds up the turnaround during AUTH48, > > >>>>>> especially with these more significant terminology updates. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> We have a few followup questions/comments: > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> A) Regarding: > > >>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are > > >>>>>>>> not > > >>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed > > >>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where > > >>>>>>>> they may be added in the text. > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> [OC-CII] Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., Roskin, > > >>>>>>>> R., > > >>>>>>>> and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights - > > >>>>>>>> Functional Specification (Placeholder before > > >>>>>>>> publication)", > > >>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_document_open-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=qcJvZoqBw-LRAayH0sGqWgMdvYE5Q-KkKjtpe-WzVkM&e= > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> caching-capacity-interface/>. > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> [OC-RR] Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, > > >>>>>>>> S., > > >>>>>>>> Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching Request > > >>>>>>>> Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4 > > >>>>>>>> October 2019, > > >>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_product_open-2Dcache-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=3bJrpgTW4v3Hy1yHCQjtqSiB7fYyWqXSQ3sc2koTq-E&e= > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> request-routing-functional-specification/>. > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> [OCWG] "Open Caching Home Page", > > >>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__opencaching.svta.org_&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=gMxEpeLepdyiTUVETw0ntKT_OKiZiIBDT2ZCPpbmYNI&e= > > >>>>>>>> >. > > >>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>> AR: Perhaps we should reference these documents in the > > >>>>>>> introduction, to highlight that > > >>>>>>> these are related. > > >>>>>>> BR - I'm fine with removing the references > > >>>>>> There appears to be conflicting guidance from Andrew and Ben for > > >>>>>> this. Please confer and let us know how we may update. > > >>>>> Apologies for not clarifying/updating the PDF to reflect the outcome: > > >>>>> I am AR in this sense, and I agree with BR (Ben) about removing the > > >>>>> non-cited references. > > >>>>> > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> B) Regarding: > > >>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this > > >>>>>>>> document > > >>>>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for > > >>>>>>>> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the > > >>>>>>>> content that surrounds it" > > >>>>>>>> (https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__authors.ietf.org_en_rfcxml-2Dvocabulary-23aside&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=Hi5ORHYUp6kBRh6540mzqlkAcPoHj54_V6XCrJlpklI&e= > > >>>>>>>> ). > > >>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>> AR: this suggestion is unclear to me > > >>>>>> Apologies for the lack of clarity. We typically ask this when we see > > >>>>>> text led by "Note:" or "Note that", which would indent the text a > > >>>>>> bit. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> For this document, we see "Note:" in Section 2. Would you like us to > > >>>>>> format with the aside element? > > >>>>> Thank you for the clarification. This seems like a good formatting > > >>>>> suggestion, can we please utilize the aside element for this Note? > > >>>>> > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The updated files have been posted here (please refresh): > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.txt&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=Yy_n0pjdcbyGINdqqo78xahPXlhiGNc2si_jupQ_w_0&e= > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.pdf&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=yCLRH9lrO8ySKY0GfiS7GPyMb39diJNmsvVU_qH2S8c&e= > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=MrtwWOKVtBRwSaOMJqxS0vX3tJA4cFeNebooaIei2lI&e= > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808.xml&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=R7rJB5-T939fIuGVlQe9L5XrsjXCmvLZIBkL5B4zByI&e= > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Ddiff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=v7AK0d5qcf1xoOGKOWoHvEhHPHGoRwbQb01KEaf4hmI&e= > > >>>>>> (comprehensive diff) > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_authors_rfc9808-2Dauth48diff.html&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=VKQj14cL9sepdnmeFVTiKvxLuF1gW7mgmgZd8FgG4wo&e= > > >>>>>> (AUTH48 changes only) > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to > > >>>>>> view the most recent version. > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > > >>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_auth48_rfc9808&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=ky-2SzhC7R9rMG22MIJkhIoFzkJ7Hx4DIjCOmy2EnTg&e= > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>> Thank you, > > >>>>>> RFC Editor/st > > >>>>>> > > >>>>>>> On Jul 18, 2025, at 9:53 AM, and...@andrewnryan.com wrote: > > >>>>>>> > > >>>>>>> Greetings, > > >>>>>>> We reviewed the feedback you supplied and have > > >>>>>>> considered/incorporated them. Please find an XML document with > > >>>>>>> changes and approval, along with a PDF document which outlines the > > >>>>>>> notes on the feedback. Please let me know if this is acceptable and > > >>>>>>> if there are any additional things I can do to facilitate. Thank you > > >>>>>>> > > >>>>>>> Andrew Ryan > > >>>>>>> > > >>>>>>> On 7/3/2025 9:51 AM, Sarah Tarrant wrote: > > >>>>>>>> Hi Andrew, > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> I'll be on the lookout for your email! > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>> Thank you, > > >>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st > > >>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> On Jul 3, 2025, at 8:47 AM, Andrew Ryan <and...@andrewnryan.com> > > >>>>>>>>> wrote: > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> Sarah, > > >>>>>>>>> Thank you for the followup. We are currently reviewing the > > >>>>>>>>> questions and should have feedback soon. Thank you again. > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> Andrew Ryan > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> On Thu, Jul 3, 2025 at 9:17 AM Sarah Tarrant > > >>>>>>>>> <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > >>>>>>>>> Authors, > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the > > >>>>>>>>> questions below and your review of the document before continuing > > >>>>>>>>> with the publication process. > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>> Thank you, > > >>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st > > >>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> On Jun 27, 2025, at 5:13 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Authors, > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > > >>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML > > >>>>>>>>>> file. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > > >>>>>>>>>> appear in > > >>>>>>>>>> the title) for use on > > >>>>>>>>>> https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_search&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=mRoLm4BB421vOCnkM7E4H8hLhE1JU-53kn5qvYP54rE&e= > > >>>>>>>>>> . --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Do the extensions define or does this > > >>>>>>>>>> specification define "a set > > >>>>>>>>>> of additional Capability Objects..."? > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Current: > > >>>>>>>>>> The Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) Capacity > > >>>>>>>>>> Capability Advertisement Extensions define a set of additional > > >>>>>>>>>> Capability Objects that provide information about current > > >>>>>>>>>> downstream > > >>>>>>>>>> CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the > > >>>>>>>>>> delegating > > >>>>>>>>>> upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation > > >>>>>>>>>> decisions. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > > >>>>>>>>>> This specification defines a set of additional > > >>>>>>>>>> Capability Objects that provide information about current > > >>>>>>>>>> downstream > > >>>>>>>>>> CDN (dCDN) utilization and specified usage limits to the > > >>>>>>>>>> delegating > > >>>>>>>>>> upstream CDN (uCDN) in order to inform traffic delegation > > >>>>>>>>>> decisions. > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] There are several lists for properties throughout > > >>>>>>>>>> the > > >>>>>>>>>> document. If the "Type" and "Mandatory-to-Specify" fields only > > >>>>>>>>>> contain one word and a period, may we remove the period? We note > > >>>>>>>>>> that this document follows the formatting style in RFC 8008; > > >>>>>>>>>> however, our current practice is to remove the punctuation if a > > >>>>>>>>>> description only contains one word (see similar examples in RFCs > > >>>>>>>>>> 9538 and 9677). Please let us know your preference. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> One example > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Current: > > >>>>>>>>>> Property: type > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Description: A valid telemetry source type (see Section > > >>>>>>>>>> 2.1.1.1). > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Type: String. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Mandatory-to-Specify: Yes. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > > >>>>>>>>>> Property: type > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Description: A valid telemetry source type (see Section > > >>>>>>>>>> 2.1.1.1). > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Type: String > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Mandatory-to-Specify: Yes > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] For consistency, should "Telemetry Capability" be > > >>>>>>>>>> updated > > >>>>>>>>>> as "the Telemetry Capability Object" in the following sentence? > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Original: > > >>>>>>>>>> The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability > > >>>>>>>>>> including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to > > >>>>>>>>>> a footprint. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > > >>>>>>>>>> The following shows an example of a Telemetry Capability > > >>>>>>>>>> Object, > > >>>>>>>>>> including two metrics for a source, that is scoped to > > >>>>>>>>>> a footprint. > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] We note that Table 1 includes a description of the > > >>>>>>>>>> "generic" source type, whereas Table 4 and the IANA registry do > > >>>>>>>>>> not. Should the description be added to Table 4 and the IANA > > >>>>>>>>>> registry? In Section 2.1.1.1, should Table 1 be replaced with a > > >>>>>>>>>> link to Table 4 to avoid duplication? > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 2.1.1.1): > > >>>>>>>>>> At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry > > >>>>>>>>>> Source > > >>>>>>>>>> Object types is limited to a single type: Generic (see > > >>>>>>>>>> Section 3.2.1). > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps A: > > >>>>>>>>>> At the time of this writing, the registry of valid Telemetry > > >>>>>>>>>> Source > > >>>>>>>>>> Types is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in > > >>>>>>>>>> Section 3.2.1). > > >>>>>>>>>> or > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps B: > > >>>>>>>>>> At the time of this writing, the "CDNI Telemetry Source Types" > > >>>>>>>>>> registry > > >>>>>>>>>> is limited to a single type: generic (see Table 4 in Section > > >>>>>>>>>> 3.2.1). > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> ... > > >>>>>>>>>> Current (Section 3.2): > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> | Source Type | Reference | > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> | generic | RFC 9808 | > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> Table 4 > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+=======================================+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> | Source Type | Description | > > >>>>>>>>>> Reference | > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+=======================================+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> | generic | An object that allows for | RFC > > >>>>>>>>>> 9808 | > > >>>>>>>>>> | | advertisement of generic data sources | > > >>>>>>>>>> | > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> +=============+=======================================+===========+ > > >>>>>>>>>> Table 4 > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference entries are > > >>>>>>>>>> not > > >>>>>>>>>> cited anywhere in the document. These entries will be removed > > >>>>>>>>>> prior to publication, unless you would like to let us know where > > >>>>>>>>>> they may be added in the text. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> [OC-CII] Ryan, A., Ed., Rosenblum, B., Goldstein, G., > > >>>>>>>>>> Roskin, R., > > >>>>>>>>>> and G. Bichot, "Open Caching Capacity Insights - > > >>>>>>>>>> Functional Specification (Placeholder before > > >>>>>>>>>> publication)", > > >>>>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_document_open-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=qcJvZoqBw-LRAayH0sGqWgMdvYE5Q-KkKjtpe-WzVkM&e= > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> caching-capacity-interface/>. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> [OC-RR] Finkelman, O., Ed., Hofmann, J., Klein, E., Mishra, > > >>>>>>>>>> S., > > >>>>>>>>>> Ma, K., Sahar, D., and B. Zurat, "Open Caching > > >>>>>>>>>> Request > > >>>>>>>>>> Routing - Functional Specification", Version 1.1, 4 > > >>>>>>>>>> October 2019, > > >>>>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.svta.org_product_open-2Dcache-2D&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=3bJrpgTW4v3Hy1yHCQjtqSiB7fYyWqXSQ3sc2koTq-E&e= > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> request-routing-functional-specification/>. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> [OCWG] "Open Caching Home Page", > > >>>>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__opencaching.svta.org_&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=gMxEpeLepdyiTUVETw0ntKT_OKiZiIBDT2ZCPpbmYNI&e= > > >>>>>>>>>> >. > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Terminology > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be > > >>>>>>>>>> used > > >>>>>>>>>> inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us know > > >>>>>>>>>> if/how they > > >>>>>>>>>> may be made consistent. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> capability object type > > >>>>>>>>>> Capability Objects > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> capacity limit-types > > >>>>>>>>>> Capacity Limits > > >>>>>>>>>> CDNI Capacity Limit Types > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> CapacityLimit Object > > >>>>>>>>>> CapacityLimit object > > >>>>>>>>>> CapacityLimits Capability Object > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> FCI capability > > >>>>>>>>>> FCI.Capability > > >>>>>>>>>> FCI.Capabilities > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> limit-type > > >>>>>>>>>> limit type > > >>>>>>>>>> Limit Type > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Payload types > > >>>>>>>>>> Payload Types > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Capability object > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Capability Object > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source > > >>>>>>>>>> telemetry source > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry sources > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source Type > > >>>>>>>>>> telemetry source type > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source Metric Object > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source Metric objects > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source Object > > >>>>>>>>>> Telemetry Source object > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> b) Should the payload types in the following titles be updated to > > >>>>>>>>>> match the payload types listed in Table 3? > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Original: > > >>>>>>>>>> 3.1.1. CDNI FCI Telemetry Payload Type > > >>>>>>>>>> 3.1.2. CDNI FCI Capacity Limits Payload Type > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: > > >>>>>>>>>> 3.1.1. CDNI FCI.Telemetry Payload Type > > >>>>>>>>>> 3.1.2. CDNI FCI.CapacityLimits Payload Type > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] FYI - We updated the following expansions to the > > >>>>>>>>>> form on > > >>>>>>>>>> the right for consistency within this document and/or the RFC > > >>>>>>>>>> Series. Please let us know of any objections. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) -> > > >>>>>>>>>> Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Footprints & Capabilities Advertisement Interface (FCI) -> > > >>>>>>>>>> Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface (FCI) > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> Time To Live (TTL) -> Time to Live (TTL) > > >>>>>>>>>> --> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please consider whether the "type" attribute of > > >>>>>>>>>> any sourcecode > > >>>>>>>>>> element should be set. > > >>>>>>>>>> > > >>>>>>>>>> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at > > >>>>>>>>>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.rfc-2Deditor.org_rpc_wiki_doku.php-3Fid-3Dsourcecode-2Dtypes&d=DwIFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=XniVbishGiO2Ao9hKqSc-hTVIWCi3T-x6GdHR4ZTgoM&m=PJlGb8RmuB6Rz0kPP68c_SZjIZAoq4YgPtbu_2OsqSiZKCVK4r_Q8fQne4dWn-FE&s=lxoxH5_8FCu3HDpV69jV560MfhKrm85OLogUFbYoQlo&e= > > >>>>>>>>>> >. > > >>>>>>>>>> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel > > >>>>>>>>>> free to > > >>>>>>>>>> suggest additions for consideration. 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