On 6/19/07, Peter Hillier-Brook <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Jean Hollis Weber wrote: > Peter Hillier-Brook wrote: >>> I did some corrections today to the text in the chapter files and the >>> full book file, so be sure to grab the latest files from this folder: >>> http://oooauthors.org/en/authors/userguide2/impress/published/folder_contents Hello Jean, Chapters 5 & 6 with the updated screenshots are now in Feedback. I've also made some small, cosmetic changes to a couple of the images, as you may note from the date on the files. Regards Peter HB
Hello Peter, Thanks for the great job. Some comments from my side (in complete random order to make your reading a bit more ... interesting) Chapter 6: Figure 3: it may be worthwhile to move the small black crosshair with a circle (btw: what is the name of that thingy?) a bit to the side Chapter 5: Figure 10: I liked the other one better (but I am probably biased :-) ) Figure 18: maybe if you select another style the words "My text" in black will stand out a bit more. Also, why the blue background? Figure 1: the arrow above number 5 is not straight (now that's being picky isn't it? :-) ) Chapter 2: Figure 6: I think the text mentions also a custom bullet point (the old image used a star as custom bullet for one of the levels). If you don't feel like updating the picture maybe we should change the descriptive text. Chapter 4 Figure 5: same comment as chapter 6 Figure 3 Chapter 1 Figure 16: I like it a lot. You may argue that we should strive for consistency in the slide templates we use, but on the other hand this is really a good slide Chapter 3 Figure 8: I would prefer to stick to a single font, but it is a very minor thing Regards, Michele
