Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now looks quite impressive !

I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting to work well. The only doubt I still have is the length of some of the texts. The players might find it too long and then we'll need to see what can be reduced, but i might be wrong - we'll see what the players say about it.

I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in your document, but they're really few and localized now.

The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see what the players think... I look forward to it.

Good job :)

D

PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time today, I'll let you know.


On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote:
Hi folks,

Please go to
http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/  for the
complete mission 1 in all its structural glory.  I just hope that it's
all there.

Alex

On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    Is anyone familiar with Prezis?


    It is an online presentation tool.  It's like Power Point, but 100
    times more dynamic.  Here is an example of one Prezi I did to
    promote my business.

    http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/

    I find it to be very useful when building an interactive structure.

    Here is what I am building now for our first mission.  You can move
    around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and out, and create a path.

    http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/

    Let me know what you think.

    Alex

    On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon
    <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
    wrote:

        Okay, I'm working on it.


        On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard
        <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

            Thx for the new version.

            I've uploaded the mission on
            http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look !

            Alex there are still some differences between the actual
            mission and what you wrote => I tried to explain why in the
            google doc, and state what remains to be done. I think a
            good first step for you would be to play 2 or 3 times the
            mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work on the doc.

            I also added on the document some numbers for the steps of
            the conversation, and letters when multiple possible
            answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote to what step it
            leads when it's ambiguous.
            I hope it'll be easier to use the document now. In the
            future, we can make all of this a lot easier by organizing
            the document like a tree where we'll input the text, I can
            do that when I find a little time.

            Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big step for you to
            take to get used to the way missions are written (with the
            tree concept and the constraints of our mission engine) !
            sorry for that I had not realized and thanks for your
            patience - I'm confident that we're not so far anymore from
            something that works.

            I'll be available today if you want to discuss the comments
            I added on the google doc.

            D


            On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote:

                Hi folks, here are the corrections for the text of the
                first mission,
                hope it covers everything.  Looking forward to seeing
                how the test goes.

                
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>

                Alex

                On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david blanchard
                <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
                <mailto:[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:



                    On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote:

                        .php  should I be opening this?  How?


                    good question !

                    If you're under windows (if you have a mac I'll need
                to check) :

                    Best option (will keep the format of the file,
                easier for you) :
                    Notepad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)

                    Else : Notepad

                    Let me know how it goes. If it's difficult for you
                to read it, we'll
                    find another solution.

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