Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now looks quite
impressive !
I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting to work
well. The only doubt I still have is the length of some of the texts.
The players might find it too long and then we'll need to see what can
be reduced, but i might be wrong - we'll see what the players say about it.
I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in your
document, but they're really few and localized now.
The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see what the
players think... I look forward to it.
Good job :)
D
PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time today, I'll
let you know.
On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote:
Hi folks,
Please go to
http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/ for the
complete mission 1 in all its structural glory. I just hope that it's
all there.
Alex
On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Is anyone familiar with Prezis?
It is an online presentation tool. It's like Power Point, but 100
times more dynamic. Here is an example of one Prezi I did to
promote my business.
http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/
I find it to be very useful when building an interactive structure.
Here is what I am building now for our first mission. You can move
around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and out, and create a path.
http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/
Let me know what you think.
Alex
On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
wrote:
Okay, I'm working on it.
On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Thx for the new version.
I've uploaded the mission on
http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look !
Alex there are still some differences between the actual
mission and what you wrote => I tried to explain why in the
google doc, and state what remains to be done. I think a
good first step for you would be to play 2 or 3 times the
mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work on the doc.
I also added on the document some numbers for the steps of
the conversation, and letters when multiple possible
answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote to what step it
leads when it's ambiguous.
I hope it'll be easier to use the document now. In the
future, we can make all of this a lot easier by organizing
the document like a tree where we'll input the text, I can
do that when I find a little time.
Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big step for you to
take to get used to the way missions are written (with the
tree concept and the constraints of our mission engine) !
sorry for that I had not realized and thanks for your
patience - I'm confident that we're not so far anymore from
something that works.
I'll be available today if you want to discuss the comments
I added on the google doc.
D
On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote:
Hi folks, here are the corrections for the text of the
first mission,
hope it covers everything. Looking forward to seeing
how the test goes.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>
Alex
On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david blanchard
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
<mailto:[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:
On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote:
.php should I be opening this? How?
good question !
If you're under windows (if you have a mac I'll need
to check) :
Best option (will keep the format of the file,
easier for you) :
Notepad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)
Else : Notepad
Let me know how it goes. If it's difficult for you
to read it, we'll
find another solution.
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