Thanks David, and I'm looking forward to see what players say. Alex
On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM, david blanchard <[email protected]>wrote: > Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now looks quite > impressive ! > > I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting to work well. > The only doubt I still have is the length of some of the texts. The players > might find it too long and then we'll need to see what can be reduced, but i > might be wrong - we'll see what the players say about it. > > I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in your document, > but they're really few and localized now. > > The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see what the > players think... I look forward to it. > > Good job :) > > D > > PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time today, I'll let > you know. > > > > On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote: > >> Hi folks, >> >> Please go to >> http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/ for the >> complete mission 1 in all its structural glory. I just hope that it's >> all there. >> >> Alex >> >> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >> wrote: >> >> Is anyone familiar with Prezis? >> >> >> It is an online presentation tool. It's like Power Point, but 100 >> times more dynamic. Here is an example of one Prezi I did to >> promote my business. >> >> http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/ >> >> I find it to be very useful when building an interactive structure. >> >> Here is what I am building now for our first mission. You can move >> around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and out, and create a >> path. >> >> http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/ >> >> Let me know what you think. >> >> Alex >> >> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >> >> wrote: >> >> Okay, I'm working on it. >> >> >> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Thx for the new version. >> >> I've uploaded the mission on >> http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look ! >> >> Alex there are still some differences between the actual >> mission and what you wrote => I tried to explain why in the >> google doc, and state what remains to be done. I think a >> good first step for you would be to play 2 or 3 times the >> mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work on the doc. >> >> I also added on the document some numbers for the steps of >> the conversation, and letters when multiple possible >> answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote to what step it >> leads when it's ambiguous. >> I hope it'll be easier to use the document now. In the >> future, we can make all of this a lot easier by organizing >> the document like a tree where we'll input the text, I can >> do that when I find a little time. >> >> Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big step for you to >> take to get used to the way missions are written (with the >> tree concept and the constraints of our mission engine) ! >> sorry for that I had not realized and thanks for your >> patience - I'm confident that we're not so far anymore from >> something that works. >> >> I'll be available today if you want to discuss the comments >> I added on the google doc. >> >> D >> >> >> On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote: >> >> Hi folks, here are the corrections for the text of the >> first mission, >> hope it covers everything. Looking forward to seeing >> how the test goes. >> >> >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> < >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> > >> < >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> < >> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >> >> >> >> Alex >> >> On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david blanchard >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> <mailto:[email protected] >> >> <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote: >> >> >> >> On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote: >> >> .php should I be opening this? How? >> >> >> good question ! >> >> If you're under windows (if you have a mac I'll need >> to check) : >> >> Best option (will keep the format of the file, >> easier for you) : >> Notepad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/) >> >> Else : Notepad >> >> Let me know how it goes. 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