Yes, he's a nice guy :)

Let me know when you want me to have a look at your document in order to integrate in the mission the latest changes

On 07/01/2011 19:49, Alex Vachon wrote:
I just played the game, I liked it.  I like Bill too, great personality!
  :-)

On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM, Alex Vachon
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    Thanks David, and I'm looking forward to see what players say.

    Alex


    On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM, david blanchard
    <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

        Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now looks
        quite impressive !

        I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting to
        work well. The only doubt I still have is the length of some of
        the texts. The players might find it too long and then we'll
        need to see what can be reduced, but i might be wrong - we'll
        see what the players say about it.

        I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in your
        document, but they're really few and localized now.

        The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see
        what the players think... I look forward to it.

        Good job :)

        D

        PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time today,
        I'll let you know.



        On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote:

            Hi folks,

            Please go to
            http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/
              for the
            complete mission 1 in all its structural glory.  I just hope
            that it's
            all there.

            Alex

            On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon
            <[email protected]
            <mailto:[email protected]>
            <mailto:[email protected]
            <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:

                Is anyone familiar with Prezis?


                It is an online presentation tool.  It's like Power
            Point, but 100
                times more dynamic.  Here is an example of one Prezi I
            did to
                promote my business.

            http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/

                I find it to be very useful when building an interactive
            structure.

                Here is what I am building now for our first mission.
              You can move
                around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and out,
            and create a path.

            http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/

                Let me know what you think.

                Alex

                On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon
            <[email protected]
            <mailto:[email protected]>
            <mailto:[email protected]
            <mailto:[email protected]>>>

                wrote:

                    Okay, I'm working on it.


                    On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard
            <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
            <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>>
            wrote:

                        Thx for the new version.

                        I've uploaded the mission on
            http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look !

                        Alex there are still some differences between
            the actual
                        mission and what you wrote => I tried to explain
            why in the
                        google doc, and state what remains to be done. I
            think a
                        good first step for you would be to play 2 or 3
            times the
                        mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work on
            the doc.

                        I also added on the document some numbers for
            the steps of
                        the conversation, and letters when multiple possible
                        answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote to
            what step it
                        leads when it's ambiguous.
                        I hope it'll be easier to use the document now.
            In the
                        future, we can make all of this a lot easier by
            organizing
                        the document like a tree where we'll input the
            text, I can
                        do that when I find a little time.

                        Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big step
            for you to
                        take to get used to the way missions are written
            (with the
                        tree concept and the constraints of our mission
            engine) !
                        sorry for that I had not realized and thanks for
            your
                        patience - I'm confident that we're not so far
            anymore from
                        something that works.

                        I'll be available today if you want to discuss
            the comments
                        I added on the google doc.

                        D


                        On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote:

                            Hi folks, here are the corrections for the
            text of the
                            first mission,
                            hope it covers everything.  Looking forward
            to seeing
                            how the test goes.

            
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
            
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>>

                            Alex

                            On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david blanchard
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            <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
            <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>

            <mailto:[email protected]
            <mailto:[email protected]>>>> wrote:



                                On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote:

                                    .php  should I be opening this?  How?


                                good question !

                                If you're under windows (if you have a
            mac I'll need
                            to check) :

                                Best option (will keep the format of the
            file,
                            easier for you) :
                                Notepad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)

                                Else : Notepad

                                Let me know how it goes. If it's
            difficult for you
                            to read it, we'll
                                find another solution.


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