I just played the game, I liked it.  I like Bill too, great personality!
 :-)

On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM, Alex Vachon <[email protected]>wrote:

> Thanks David, and I'm looking forward to see what players say.
>
> Alex
>
>
> On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM, david blanchard <[email protected]>wrote:
>
>> Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now looks quite
>> impressive !
>>
>> I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting to work well.
>> The only doubt I still have is the length of some of the texts. The players
>> might find it too long and then we'll need to see what can be reduced, but i
>> might be wrong - we'll see what the players say about it.
>>
>> I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in your document,
>> but they're really few and localized now.
>>
>> The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see what the
>> players think... I look forward to it.
>>
>> Good job :)
>>
>> D
>>
>> PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time today, I'll let
>> you know.
>>
>>
>>
>> On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote:
>>
>>> Hi folks,
>>>
>>> Please go to
>>> http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/  for the
>>> complete mission 1 in all its structural glory.  I just hope that it's
>>> all there.
>>>
>>> Alex
>>>
>>> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon
>>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>    Is anyone familiar with Prezis?
>>>
>>>
>>>    It is an online presentation tool.  It's like Power Point, but 100
>>>    times more dynamic.  Here is an example of one Prezi I did to
>>>    promote my business.
>>>
>>>    http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/
>>>
>>>    I find it to be very useful when building an interactive structure.
>>>
>>>    Here is what I am building now for our first mission.  You can move
>>>    around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and out, and create a
>>> path.
>>>
>>>    http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/
>>>
>>>    Let me know what you think.
>>>
>>>    Alex
>>>
>>>    On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon
>>>    <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
>>>
>>>    wrote:
>>>
>>>        Okay, I'm working on it.
>>>
>>>
>>>        On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard
>>>        <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>>
>>>            Thx for the new version.
>>>
>>>            I've uploaded the mission on
>>>            http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look !
>>>
>>>            Alex there are still some differences between the actual
>>>            mission and what you wrote => I tried to explain why in the
>>>            google doc, and state what remains to be done. I think a
>>>            good first step for you would be to play 2 or 3 times the
>>>            mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work on the doc.
>>>
>>>            I also added on the document some numbers for the steps of
>>>            the conversation, and letters when multiple possible
>>>            answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote to what step it
>>>            leads when it's ambiguous.
>>>            I hope it'll be easier to use the document now. In the
>>>            future, we can make all of this a lot easier by organizing
>>>            the document like a tree where we'll input the text, I can
>>>            do that when I find a little time.
>>>
>>>            Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big step for you to
>>>            take to get used to the way missions are written (with the
>>>            tree concept and the constraints of our mission engine) !
>>>            sorry for that I had not realized and thanks for your
>>>            patience - I'm confident that we're not so far anymore from
>>>            something that works.
>>>
>>>            I'll be available today if you want to discuss the comments
>>>            I added on the google doc.
>>>
>>>            D
>>>
>>>
>>>            On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote:
>>>
>>>                Hi folks, here are the corrections for the text of the
>>>                first mission,
>>>                hope it covers everything.  Looking forward to seeing
>>>                how the test goes.
>>>
>>>
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
>>>                <
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
>>> >
>>>                <
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
>>>                <
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
>>> >>
>>>
>>>                Alex
>>>
>>>                On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david blanchard
>>>                <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
>>>                <mailto:[email protected]
>>>
>>>                <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>                    On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote:
>>>
>>>                        .php  should I be opening this?  How?
>>>
>>>
>>>                    good question !
>>>
>>>                    If you're under windows (if you have a mac I'll need
>>>                to check) :
>>>
>>>                    Best option (will keep the format of the file,
>>>                easier for you) :
>>>                    Notepad++ (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)
>>>
>>>                    Else : Notepad
>>>
>>>                    Let me know how it goes. If it's difficult for you
>>>                to read it, we'll
>>>                    find another solution.
>>>
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