of course !
And if they can tell you (or directly here on the ml) what they thought of it, even better !

For them to try, best is to wait for a clean version we should have tonight - the one we'll use for tonight's playtest. I'll let you know when it's live.

On 07/01/2011 19:50, Alex Vachon wrote:
Can I invite people to try it?

On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM, Alex Vachon
<[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    I just played the game, I liked it.  I like Bill too, great
    personality!  :-)


    On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM, Alex Vachon
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    wrote:

        Thanks David, and I'm looking forward to see what players say.

        Alex


        On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM, david blanchard
        <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

            Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now
            looks quite impressive !

            I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting
            to work well. The only doubt I still have is the length of
            some of the texts. The players might find it too long and
            then we'll need to see what can be reduced, but i might be
            wrong - we'll see what the players say about it.

            I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in
            your document, but they're really few and localized now.

            The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see
            what the players think... I look forward to it.

            Good job :)

            D

            PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time
            today, I'll let you know.



            On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote:

                Hi folks,

                Please go to
                http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/  for
                the
                complete mission 1 in all its structural glory.  I just
                hope that it's
                all there.

                Alex

                On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon
                <[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>
                <mailto:[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:

                    Is anyone familiar with Prezis?


                    It is an online presentation tool.  It's like Power
                Point, but 100
                    times more dynamic.  Here is an example of one Prezi
                I did to
                    promote my business.

                http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/

                    I find it to be very useful when building an
                interactive structure.

                    Here is what I am building now for our first
                mission.  You can move
                    around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and
                out, and create a path.

                http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/

                    Let me know what you think.

                    Alex

                    On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon
                <[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>
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                <mailto:[email protected]>>>

                    wrote:

                        Okay, I'm working on it.


                        On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard
                <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
                <mailto:[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote:

                            Thx for the new version.

                            I've uploaded the mission on
                http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look !

                            Alex there are still some differences
                between the actual
                            mission and what you wrote => I tried to
                explain why in the
                            google doc, and state what remains to be
                done. I think a
                            good first step for you would be to play 2
                or 3 times the
                            mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work
                on the doc.

                            I also added on the document some numbers
                for the steps of
                            the conversation, and letters when multiple
                possible
                            answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote
                to what step it
                            leads when it's ambiguous.
                            I hope it'll be easier to use the document
                now. In the
                            future, we can make all of this a lot easier
                by organizing
                            the document like a tree where we'll input
                the text, I can
                            do that when I find a little time.

                            Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big
                step for you to
                            take to get used to the way missions are
                written (with the
                            tree concept and the constraints of our
                mission engine) !
                            sorry for that I had not realized and thanks
                for your
                            patience - I'm confident that we're not so
                far anymore from
                            something that works.

                            I'll be available today if you want to
                discuss the comments
                            I added on the google doc.

                            D


                            On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote:

                                Hi folks, here are the corrections for
                the text of the
                                first mission,
                                hope it covers everything.  Looking
                forward to seeing
                                how the test goes.

                
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE
                
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE>>>

                                Alex

                                On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david
                blanchard
                <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
                <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
                <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>

                <mailto:[email protected]
                <mailto:[email protected]>>>> wrote:



                                    On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon wrote:

                                        .php  should I be opening this?
                  How?


                                    good question !

                                    If you're under windows (if you have
                a mac I'll need
                                to check) :

                                    Best option (will keep the format of
                the file,
                                easier for you) :
                                    Notepad++
                (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/)

                                    Else : Notepad

                                    Let me know how it goes. If it's
                difficult for you
                                to read it, we'll
                                    find another solution.


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