On Fri, 2010-08-13 at 12:15 +0200, tartaruga feliz wrote:
> hello!
> thanks for the feedback :)

And thanks for the modifications :D

> I realized just today that I was using the wrong mock up to create the
> design, so I redid everything accordingly to the final mock up and
> already added some of your impressions on it.
> Please have a look at it, and if its fine I'll redo the content pages.

It's better yup - but it became very crowded visually. It's a direct
result of the addition of the missing boxes, but I think it misses some
space, to "breathe" a little. 

Also, right now there are a lot of areas competing for the eye's
attention at the same time. Especially on the top of the home page (the
part that is immediately visible before scrolling), we shouldn't have
more than 2 or 3 areas that stand out IMHO. Right now there are 6 boxes
that attract the attention on a more or less equal level: "Play the
game" (that stands out a little), Farsides, Participate, Quick Links,
Follow Us and Project/Company/References box.

Not sure how to solve it (I'll let that part to you : ) ), but maybe
something among the lines of: merging Quick Links & Follow Us, reducing
the height of Project/Company/References box, moving "Participate" to
clear out some space. But that's just an idea.

Also, the news, forum and contributor boxes are good, but the white
ground background is too close to the light blue of the background
picture IMHO. The separation is thus less clear to the eye, and it gives
that unfinished feeling again : )

The bottom/footerpart is good imho! Would leave it like that : )

Thanks Deborah,
Xavier.

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