> Installation Configuration should probably have a
> link to on-line 
> documenation.
> Perhaps the "How to Administer the Manifest Files for
> an Install 
> Service" chapter
> from 
> http://dlc.sun.com/osol/docs/content/2009.06/AIinstall
> /solarisinstall.html

I inserted a link.

> From the Installing Clients section the following
>  statement should be 
> hanged
> to match the Jumpstart wording:
> 
> For Automated Installer, set up an install
>  service on your install 
> erver
> and then boot the client. The install service
>  can serve clients without
> explicit client setup. If you want to provide a
>  custom 
> onfiguration, you
>      can create a setup for a specific client.
> aps:
> 
> For Automated Installer, set up an install
>  service using <tt>installadm
> create</tt> on your install server and then boot
>  the client. The 
> nstall
> service can serve clients without explicit
>  client setup. If you want to
> provide a custom configuration, you can create a
>  setup for a specific
>     client.

I changed this text.

> om the Test Install section the following link does
> not work:
> 
> See "How to Review What You Have on Your Server"
>  in Chapter 6
> 
> ttp://docs.sun.com/app/docs/doc/820-6566/view

This is because the updated doc is not yet available on docs.sun.com

> From the Reset the Root Password on the Client for
>  Automated Installer you
> ight want to have the manifest link again.

ok

> For the Comparing JumpStart Keywords and Automated
> Installer Directives 
> section
> there should be a link again to the manifest
> subsection and you might 
> add a note
> about changing the manifest name otherwise installadm
> and the server 
> will have
> issues.

Added link but not details about changing name. This is mentioned in the AI 
guide and elsewhere.

> From the same section within the table the hostname
>  portion for Automated
> nstaller is incorrect.   I think this should be 'No
> comparable criteria'.

changed

> The IPS package section should be done using the new
> IPS package names.
> Specifically, these should be something more like:
> 
> <pkg name="pkg:/entire"/>
> <pkg name="pkg:/SUNWcs"/>
> <pkg name="pkg:/SUNWcsd"/>
> <pkg name="pkg:/babel_install"/>

These are the names that are in there now. Can you advise me of updated names? 
These names are also in the AI guide. Perhaps I misunderstand your comment?

> Similar comment for later package sections listing
> SUNWnew and SUNWfoo 
> for the
> jumpstart column.

I assume these are just placeholder names.

Please let me know if I have not satisfactorily addressed your comments.
Thanks!
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