> General: Most of the descriptions of AI functionality > are 2-3 times > longer than the descriptions of the AI equivalent. > This makes it sound > like AI is far more complicated than it is (or will > be, in cases where > enhancements are coming), even though the > descriptions are generally > valuable. In some cases, deferring some of the > details of AI to the > sub-pages would make sense; in others, a slightly > longer explanation of > the JS equivalent would help (in particular, > highlighting why the JS > equivalent is more difficult, where applicable).
Since this is about migrating from JumpStart to AI, I started with the assumptions that readers already know how to use JumpStart, are less familiar with AI, and want to know more about AI using JumpStart as a guide. > Installation configurations: The reference to XML in > "Automated > Installer uses XML AI manifest files" seems to be a > bit wordy at this > stage. The internal format of the files aren't under > discussion in this > section, so is there a reason to call it out? nixed it > Upgrade Systems: Again, expand the JS section. "To > upgrade systems using > JumpStart, you have create a separate(?) profile, and > run JumpStart all > over again." Added this > Install Third Party Software: Perhaps this section > could be "installing > additional software". Then highlight how installing > additional IPS based > packages is trivial. The explanation on how to > install SVR4 packages is > fine, though it could be shortened to "to install > SVR4 packages as part > of an AI installation, create a first reboot SMF > service that installs > the packages, and install that SMF service as part of > the AI install by > supplying it in an IPS package" (or something like > that). I believe installing additional SVR4 packages from the Solaris DVD using JumpStart also is trivial. The difference between JumpStart and AI that I was hoping to describe here is how to install apps that are not on the Solaris DVD or not in an IPS repo. -- This message posted from opensolaris.org _______________________________________________ caiman-discuss mailing list [email protected] http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/caiman-discuss
