> General:
> Not sure if you're trying to use Automated Installer
> rather than AI. The links 
> at the top have both, and so does text on the page.
> It would be good to have it 
> "defined" somewhere "Automated Installer (AI)"
> reference to define it.

Added this

> The following links brought up docs.sun.com with
>      Error: The requested item could not be found:

This is because the doc is not yet published to docs.sun.com

> Under Similarities:
> "Can boot clients either from an install server or
> from media (for example, for 
> SPARC clients that do not have WANboot capability)"
> 
> SPARC clients that -> Automated Install SPARC
>  clients that

I don't understand this. This is the same for both JumpStart clients and 
Automated Installer clients, isn't it?

> Under Installing Clients, it would be helpful to have
> a link to how to create 
> setup for a specific client

Added a link

> Under Installation Configurations, the AI paragraph
> would probably benefit if 
> there was a link to some example (short) manifests,
> demonstrating what you've 
> explained in the text.

Added links

> Under Profile Keywords and Criteria Manifest
> Directives:
> o for JumpStart usedisk, it would be good if the
> ai_target_device referred to 
> the JumpStart boot_device section, showing how
> ai_target_device is used.

Added that text

> Under Converting JumpStart Rules and Profile Files to
> Automated Installer 
> Manifests, a few things:
> o In the sample Jumpstart profile, if you want the
> evo cluster, the name is 
> SUNWCevo. I think you might just want the
> SUNWevolution package, in which case 
> you would use:
>       package         SUNWevolution
> rather than using the cluster keyword.

I updated the cluster name, but I am not knowledgeable about JumpStart to know 
whether the profile should change further. Have asked for comment from others 
who are JumpStart experts.

> o Probably use the /rel repo rather than /dev in
> example?

changed

> o the JumpStart example *adds* evolution and the AI
> example *removes* it. I 
> think you want it to be the same for both?

changed

> o for the AI manifest, you should use the new name
> for SUNWevolution, mail/evolution

fixed

> (nit) Under Converting Rules to a Criteria Manifest,
> in the table for Equivalent 
> AI Criteria Manifest Directives, the ARCH value is
> Sparc while under Rules 
> Keywords and Criteria Manifest Directives, it shows
> sparc. I believe it's case 
> insensitive, but thought I'd note it.

I hope it's case insensitive - I changed it!
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