Hi,

Went over Section 1 this morning.

One small typo - 1st paragraph on page 28 "spouses of a person, and unsigned byte ", the 'and' >> 'an'.

The chapter on normalization is excellent.

The chapter on data types I really want to go over again, I felt a bit uneasy with one of two items. Nit-picky stuff, rather the nature of the subject matter. Anyway, I may want to offer a replacement for one or two lines (that's all) - but want first to go check some facts. I can get to that this evening, but again, it's nit-picky so maybe not appropriate for the audience. Also, perhaps others may have a different take on it.

Over all Section 1 is quite good IMO.

Alright - I'll get to Section 2 tomorrow.

Thanks

Drew


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