John McCreesh skrev:
I like the layout, but I'm wondering:
* who is this page aimed at
* what do we want them to do as a result of reading it
* what reasons do we give them for doing so
If we can answer these, I think we can sharpen the page up a bit.
As an attempt for the third answer:
This promotion page gives the user the image of a very modern,
cutting-edge and great free product. It creates the interest of trying
it out.
Per
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