Hi Jinmei. >- add a note in Introduction like this: > This document is just an analysis of each possible approach, and > does not make any recommendation on particular one or on a > combination of particular ones. Some approaches may even not > adopted at all as a result of further discussion.
It sounds good for me except the last sentence of your description. I think the first sentence is almost enough. > - revise section 4 to clarify the consideration of the combination is > just an attempt to show a possible strategy *if we take all the > three approaches*. Perhaps we need a note like this: > > Three approaches can work together for IPv6 host configuration of > DNS server. This section shows a consideration on how these > approaches can interwork each other. Note, however, that this > does not necessarily mean this document suggests adopting all the > three approaches and make them interwork in the way described > here. In fact, some approaches may even not adopted at all as a > result of further discussion. same as above. Regards. - Daniel (Soohong Daniel Park) - Mobile Platform Lab. Samsung Electronics. . dnsop resources:_____________________________________________________ web user interface: http://darkwing.uoregon.edu/~llynch/dnsop.html mhonarc archive: http://darkwing.uoregon.edu/~llynch/dnsop/index.html
