>>>>> On Thu, 24 Jun 2004 14:00:30 +0900,
>>>>> Soohong Daniel Park <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> said:
>> - add a note in Introduction like this: This document is just an
>> analysis of each possible approach, and does not make any
>> recommendation on particular one or on a combination of particular
>> ones. Some approaches may even not adopted at all as a result of
>> further discussion.
> It sounds good for me except the last sentence of your description.
> I think the first sentence is almost enough.
>> - revise section 4 to clarify the consideration of the combination
>> is just an attempt to show a possible strategy *if we take all the
>> three approaches*. Perhaps we need a note like this:
>>
>> Three approaches can work together for IPv6 host configuration of
>> DNS server. This section shows a consideration on how these
>> approaches can interwork each other. Note, however, that this does
>> not necessarily mean this document suggests adopting all the three
>> approaches and make them interwork in the way described here. In
>> fact, some approaches may even not adopted at all as a result of
>> further discussion.
> same as above.
I personally believe the latter parts are rather important to not
misguide the readers. At least I don't see why we cannot keep the
small two sentences.
But I won't necessarily push including these parts, if the authors
really want to remove the additional sentence.
JINMEI, Tatuya
Communication Platform Lab.
Corporate R&D Center, Toshiba Corp.
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
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