---
 worg-about.org | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/worg-about.org b/worg-about.org
index 666ddd2a..a701d31c 100644
--- a/worg-about.org
+++ b/worg-about.org
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #+TITLE:      About Worg
 #+AUTHOR:     Worg people
-#+STARTUP:    align fold nodlcheck hidestars oddeven lognotestate
+#+STARTUP:    align fold nodlcheck oddeven lognotestate
 #+SEQ_TODO:   TODO(t) INPROGRESS(i) WAITING(w@) | DONE(d) CANCELED(c@)
 #+TAGS:       Write(w) Update(u) Fix(f) Check(c)
 #+LANGUAGE:   en
@@ -43,20 +43,20 @@ Their role is to take care of 
[[https://git.sr.ht/~bzg/worg][the Worg repository
 maintainers and contributors.
 
 Worg was started by [[http://bzg.fr][Bastien]] in the hope that other Org-ers 
around will
-bite into this and start sharing tutorials, example of codes, etc.
+participate and start sharing tutorials, example of codes, etc.
 
 * Why use Org-mode for creating a collaborative website?
 
-Because Org makes it easy, fast and effective to edit *well-structured*
+Org makes it easy, fast and effective to edit *well-structured*
 files.  Ever wanted to edit a [[file:org-tutorials/tables.org][table]] in a 
wiki?  Ever wanted to change
 the outline structure in a wikipage?  Ever wanted to edit lists
 quickly?  Org lets you do this.
 
-Because Org-mode makes *beautiful* documents: it supports links, font
+Org-mode makes *beautiful* documents: it supports links, font
 beautification, examples, etc.  And you can export those documents to
 HTML, LaTeX, or DocBook.
 
-Because Org is also a powerful *task-management system*.  Hopefully sharing
+Org is also a powerful *task-management system*.  Hopefully sharing
 a [[file:todo.org][TODO file]] will make it easy for everyone to know where he 
could help.
 
 * OK, I want to *contribute to Worg* now!
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ and push commits directly.
 
    : ~$ git commit -a -m "summary comment about all changes"
 
-7. If you are have write access, push your change directly to Worg:
+7. If you have write access, push your change directly to Worg:
 
    : ~$ git push
 
@@ -135,18 +135,18 @@ issues are trivial to fix.
 
 1. Go to your =worg/= directory.
 
-2. Be sure to "pull" the last version of the repository.
+2. Be sure to "pull" the latest version of the repository.
 
    : ~$ git pull --rebase
 
 3. Make some changes.  (If you want to learn more about various git
-   workflow, read [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].)
+   workflows, read [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].)
 
-4. Commit your changes on your local repository:
+4. Commit your changes to your local repository:
 
    : ~$ git commit -a -m "summary comment about all changes"
 
-5. Push your change on the remote repository
+5. Push your change to the remote repository
 
    : ~$ git push
 
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ See [[file:worg-git-advanced.org][this page]].
 Emacs's VC supports many common git operations, but others, like
 repository syncing must be done from the command line.  For example
 the Command =C-x v v= does check in changes in the *local* and not in the
-*remote* repository in contrast to other back ends like svn.  It is
+*remote* repository, in contrast to other back ends like svn.  It is
 necessary to do additionally
 
 : ~$ git push
-- 
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