Page 86 "but as the taredhel magician possessed more knowledge" in reference to 
Amirantha who is obviously not an Elf (also shouldn't taredhel be capitalised?).

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To: [email protected]
Subject: RE: Errors in A Crown Imperilled
Date: Sat, 18 Feb 2012 22:45:37 +1000







Page 178 "see the small man land on his feet with east." should be ease.  Also 
is it just me or is the spine of the book upside down as when I hold it right 
way up the Harper Voyager name and logo are up the top and upside down as well 
as the crown itself being upside down.

> From: [email protected]
> To: [email protected]
> Subject: RE: Errors in A Crown Imperilled
> Date: Sat, 18 Feb 2012 12:00:01 +0000
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected]
> [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Ivan Johansen
> Sent: 18 February 2012 11:40
> To: feistfans-l
> Subject: Re: Errors in A Crown Imperilled
> 
> On 18-02-2012 03:38, Michael Coloretti wrote:
> > Damn. Thats a lot of errors.
> 
> Yes, I thought that too.
> 
> > I missed nearly all of them. Maybe it's
> > because I enjoy the story rather than focus on the grammar and
> > punctuation.
> 
> I actually don't focus on grammar and punctuation. I just found that I
> often had to reread the same sentence several times because I didn't
> understand it.
> 
> > You did miss one though. They were at Yilth, the word waste
> > was used instead of waist. Small error, but amusing.
> 
> I am sure that I missed a lot. I usually do not notice errors in
> spelling and grammar, but I think a lot of these really stood out.
> 
> Ivan Johansen
> 
> I think the half missing sentences were the worse for me.
> 
>  --
> 
> Reality is what you bump into in the dark. - Raymond E. Feist
> 
> Barry Ruck - Harlow, Essex. UK.
> 
> 
> 
                                                                                
  

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