On 2014-04-08, at 5:51 PM, Vass, Joanna wrote:
> Linked is the updated floe narrative mocked up in the floe site. Let me know
> if you have any feedback.
Joanna, this looks really good. The language seems pretty good. I've noticed a
couple of places where punctuation might be adjusted, and other small things,
but I can adjust them with the HTML implementation. I'll give it a second
look-through, and let you know if I have any more major suggestions.
I'd like to start working up the HTML and CSS for this page. Would you be able
to update the JIRA with the images, colour codes, etc.?
http://issues.fluidproject.org/browse/FLOE-180
Thanks!
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Anastasia Cheetham Inclusive Design Research Centre
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OCAD University
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