Jeremias, It is very nice. I like the way you have managed to get a complete business card example on the poster.
A few remarks: Tab 'Introduction'. I am a bit hesitant about this title. It is more a title for a chapter. 'Introducing Apache FOP' or 'What is Apache FOP?' may be better alternatives for a poster. Tab 'Foreign XML Support': 'SVG ... built-in': closing parenthesis missing. In 'Transformation Chain': When you say 'the XSLT stylesheet', I say 'which one?' For a reader for whom this is really new, it comes out of the blue sky. I share Jay's preference for short sentences and commas, and like his suggestions. I have one more, in the same tab 'Transformation Chain': ... (exemplary). It begins with ... source, from which ...'. Regards, Simon On Mon, Aug 28, 2006 at 12:39:55AM +0200, Jeremias Maerki wrote: > Gang, > > I've finally finished (more or less anyway) the poster I plan to put up > at OpenExpo on 2006-09-20. I'd appreciate if someone could take a quick > peek and tell me if it's looking too ugly or if there are any spelling > mistakes. The logos may seem a bit dark on screen, but they look fine in > print. > > http://jeremias-maerki.ch/download/fop/fop-poster.pdf > > BTW, the poster is done entirely with FOP and Batik. :-) > > Thanks, > Jeremias Maerki > -- Simon Pepping home page: http://www.leverkruid.eu
