Hi Jeremias.
Jeremias Maerki:
> Thanks, Andreas, Manuel, Jay, Vincent, Glen, Simon, for all your
> suggestions, corrections and nitpicking. I've incorporated almost all
> points. The new version is now uploaded at the same location as before.
Nice looking poster! I have some suggestions, too:
- If you can, I think a font nicer than Verdana could be used. It’s
an OK display font, but doesn’t look good on a printed page, IMO.
The fonts bundled with Vista are particularly nice, if you have
access to them[1,2].
- Can FOP automatically do ligatures? If so, you should enable it.
Otherwise manually replace the characters in the document (“fi” with
“fi”, etc.).
- In the “Transformation chain” box, the “Transformation” word under
the arrow bumps into the yellow layout box. I’m unsure about the
use of the word “exemplary” in here, too.
- I don’t think the word “Banks” should be capitalised in the “Use
Cases” box.
- In “Project History”, “was quickly adopted by many” sounds better
than “quickly got adopted by many”. Also “prevented important
features to be implemented” -> “prevent important features from
being implemented”.
- It is hard to read the “For more details, please visit …” white text
on the light blue background.
I particularly like the business card example!
Cameron
[1] http://www.poynter.org/column.asp?id=47&aid=78683
[2] http://digg.com/software/The_New_Vista_Fonts
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