Hi Jeremias. Jeremias Maerki: > Thanks, Andreas, Manuel, Jay, Vincent, Glen, Simon, for all your > suggestions, corrections and nitpicking. I've incorporated almost all > points. The new version is now uploaded at the same location as before.
Nice looking poster! I have some suggestions, too: - If you can, I think a font nicer than Verdana could be used. It’s an OK display font, but doesn’t look good on a printed page, IMO. The fonts bundled with Vista are particularly nice, if you have access to them[1,2]. - Can FOP automatically do ligatures? If so, you should enable it. Otherwise manually replace the characters in the document (“fi” with “ﬁ”, etc.). - In the “Transformation chain” box, the “Transformation” word under the arrow bumps into the yellow layout box. I’m unsure about the use of the word “exemplary” in here, too. - I don’t think the word “Banks” should be capitalised in the “Use Cases” box. - In “Project History”, “was quickly adopted by many” sounds better than “quickly got adopted by many”. Also “prevented important features to be implemented” -> “prevent important features from being implemented”. - It is hard to read the “For more details, please visit …” white text on the light blue background. I particularly like the business card example! Cameron  http://www.poynter.org/column.asp?id=47&aid=78683  http://digg.com/software/The_New_Vista_Fonts -- Cameron McCormack, http://mcc.id.au/ xmpp:[EMAIL PROTECTED] ▪ ICQ 26955922 ▪ MSN [EMAIL PROTECTED]