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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-10-10 IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number field" ? -[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference would be useful since it is not an IETF WG. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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