/Hi Robert,
On 10/10/2013 05:01 PM, Robert Cragie wrote:
The suggested reference is:
[SEP2] ZigBee Alliance, Inc. and HomePlug Powerline Alliance, Inc.,
"Smart Energy Profile 2 9 Application Protocol Standard", ZigBee
Public Document 13-0200-00, 2013.
Then perhaps reword:
"This draft is motivated by the considerations raised in the Zigbee
Smart Energy 2.0 working group"
to something like:
"This draft is motivated by the considerations raised in the Zigbee
Smart Energy 2.0 working group and specified in [SEP2]"
perfect, thanks!
David
Robert
On 10/10/2013 16:32, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
Hi,
Thank you David.
Best Regards,
Meral
*From:*David McGrew [mailto:[email protected]]
*Sent:* Thursday, October 10, 2013 6:10 AM
*To:* Meral Shirazipour
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[email protected]; [email protected]
*Subject:* Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of
draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
Hi Meral,
many thanks for the review, more inline:
On 10/10/2013 03:26 AM, Meral Shirazipour wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background
on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2013-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10
IESG Telechat date: NA
Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do
have some editorial comments.
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and
"sequence_number field" ?
looking at RFC 6655 suggests that the latter should be changed to
match the former.
-[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a
reference would be useful since it is not an IETF WG.
That is a good idea. I've copied Robert Cragie, who should be able
to suggest a good reference.
David
Best Regards,
Meral
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