Thanks for your review, Meral. Jari
On Oct 10, 2013, at 3:26 PM, Meral Shirazipour <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq > . > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2013-10-10 > IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some > editorial comments. > > Nits/editorial comments: > -[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number > field" ? > -[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference > would be useful since it is not an IETF WG. > > > Best Regards, > Meral > > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
